It reads like a boy who has yet to reach puberty with delusions of grandeur wrote this story in a way that is closer to a to-do list than a story.

Just reading the summary made me terrified of the translation. The first chapter affirmed that the translation is out of context and I could not get passed it. It uses terms like Highschool of the Demons and Demon High School for Highschool DxD which DxD stands for Draconic Deus which is what the universe is called. Thus calling it anything related to Demons or Devils makes me concerned for the translation and the author's understanding of the world they made the fanfic based in.

Once this turned from a technology based system to a system that can also summoning of people I lost interest in it. What is next he is going to summon infinite resources? Then should it not just be a multiversal system store where the currency is a reflection of his reputation and or income minus what he has used in the system store? I think where I draw the line is the summoning of people for a tech system.

second "was" should be *to be*

To be honest, the story develops interestingly and is translated well or written natively in English. What throughs me off is that its like a urban cultivator mixed with a young master story based in the USA. Its a really weird read. I haven't seen an actual description of the characters that were not summoned, and no world background has been really established. The stability of updates I rated right in the middle as I don't feel like there is enough of the story written that actually progresses the story for a accurate measurement. I am conflicted on if I would recommend this story or not. On one hand its pretty bog standard for the story archetype but it being based in the USA without any form of adaption to Western culture really feels weird. Specifically the Young Master thing. You may find it here in the super rich but the number of families here in the USA that are that rich would limit the young master type story to a handful or two of families.

thats no including the license plate, insurance and other expences.

that should be closer to 5 billion.... 50 x 100 is 5,000. if you add the six zeros at the end due to the million it makes it 5 billion.

please no emoji

That's a stupid question, with the way you explained it he could slowly cut off his natural energy usage and die which is tantamount to suicide but still a possibility. Second those questions shouldn't be asked to Kurenai but Kazutora. It also sounds like Katsuyu just wants to isolate Kazutora from people.

The vehicles you are referring to would likely require a CDL A, B or C or specific licenses to carry such cargo within. Thus why they aren't found in small towns not because of dirt roads as there are places where packages delivered through mail will deliver miles into such locations. (ignoring that the vehicles that deliver mail are often called trucks they are designed like vans.) CDL stands for Commercial Driver's License. The difference between A and B grades are that A doesn't restrict the types of jobs you can get with it while B does. C grade is vaguer but mostly is defined by allowing you to legally drive a vehicle for commercial use that doesn't follow defined restrictions of the other two and must be designed to transport 16 or more passengers including the driver or is placarded for hazardous materials.

I assume you mean pie not cake. Very different baked goods.

A van is usually the length of a truck but where they differ is a van is completely enclosed and is designed to seat more people while a truck has an open bed in the back and is designed to store stuff like equipment or farm produce in the back.

You seem to have a lot of issues with perspective switches. Because again in this chapter I saw a few that seemed unclear who was supposed to be talking.

Chinese is closer to a culture group like if you called a Welsh person European. Generally it is correct but a little disingenuous or incomplete. Even more so in the context of the question I asked. Thanks for the information though. I appreciate it.

Thanks. I never knew that was an idiom. What culture compares pots to blame?

But how does The Pot King reference Danzo? That was what I was confused about.

Kazutora not Kidou

Up till now I thought The Pot King was Hiruzen due to him always smoking. Now I understand it was Danzo? I don't know if that is correct still. This fanfic is the first time I have seen someone from the Naruto Universe to be referred to as The Pot King.

this reads weirdly. maybe seperate thanks buddy as that is clearly clark saying it and not pete or chloe.

what is this? an ad and warning for contraceptives?