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Abby_Aston8dCommentedCh 288 Loss of Luck- Abby_Aston9dCommented
Did we change the name of the sister now? The pronoun mixups can be over looked… please don’t start changing names!
The audience's comments were continuous, condemning Yu Ruo and Xu Xiyan. - Abby_Aston2mthCommented
Bella again? Is this from a different book? I’ll read it too if you stop changing the names and spelling of names!!
Bella covered her face with her hands. She could not believe that she told Dami she wanted to sleep with him every night. - Abby_Aston2mthCommentedCh 63 Words Are Same
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Who is Ana? I was confused when you shorted Damien’s name, jump between Evan/ Even, changed Evangeline’s sister’s name… now we are changing the Evangeline’s?
"Yet, you were not there when she was attacked." he taunted, his eyes moving from them to Ian. Ian bowed his head in embarrassment but Dami did not care. His eyes went frosty as he gave them a murdering look but Ana pressed his arm. When he looked at her, she shook her head. - Abby_Aston2mthCommented
Pronoun mix up again. Please fix these.
"Harold! What do you mean? You can not lock me at my own house. Harold.." but his cries went unheard. - Abby_Aston2mthCommented
Who is Else? Then names aren’t going to start changing are they?
"You meant that she jumped from the second floor and there is not a single drop of blood on the ground. And after falling, she stood up and ran from there to trap you in your own plan?" if Else did not know how stupid her words sound even to herself, she would have realized it by the look on his face. - Abby_Aston2mthCommented
Mixing pronouns when referring to Evangeline.
"Of course not, Elene. We both know how important you are to me. But we need to lie low for a few days. And when the matter would be forgotten, we will find a way to punish her." he stared deep into Evan's eyes when he added the last line. There was a cold provoking smirk on his face but the woman had her eyes closed. As if she was not in the carriage, she could not hear or worse they were not talking about him at all. She was above them and they did not deserve her attention. - Abby_Aston2mthCommentedCh 18 Sick Or Shameless
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I have quit reading books I was completely invested in because their chapters were consistently too short! I felt robbed! PLEASE don’t stop writing lengthy chapters!!🙏🙏
>>>I am sorry for lengthy chaps guys. 😭😭 I can't break it down because each chap will be so short and that won't be interesting. 🥹🥹As always Vote Vote Vote<<< - Abby_Aston3mthCommentedCh 170 Dealing with Countess Olivier (2)
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What a moron!! She’s the one who originally started that rumor!
Many rumors sprung up without giving her a chance to prepare herself upon hearing them. Each and every one of them inflamed the boiling rage in her heart. She couldn't help but wonder why the past rumors had said the Grand duke was indifferent to that child. - Abby_Aston3mthCommented
This made me giggle!! Poor Kaiser! (Followed by more gigggling!)
''....'' Kaiser released another helpless sigh as he placed his fingers on his forehead while shaking it. ''I think that saying should be that fathers forgets their sons once they have daughters.'' - Abby_Aston4mthCommented
Why is the first few lines of each chapter and the last few lines from the previous chapter the same? And why is there such a huge gap in mentions? This is wasting space that could be filled with your words!! This book is good and I don’t want to stop reading but I will! I’m starting to feel cheated!!!
Ch 83 Chapter 82: What Would You Have Done? - Abby_Aston4mthCommentedCh 53 Chapter 52: She Had a Very Difficult Life
- Abby_Aston4mthCommentedCh 6 Chapter 5: How It Came to Be
- Abby_Aston4mthCommentedCh 20 Chapter 20: You Eat Human?
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Why do you keep repeating this message? I like your book so far but the wasted space at the end of EVERY chapter is getting old quickly !
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