Solid 4.6, I agree with another reviewer that the mc doesn’t really have any cool moves, like seeing the art at full power, but that’s fine since it wouldn’t go with the story. Now my biggest issue is that his way of gaining slav- I mean workers is very repetitive, and it kinda get boring. Some examples of this would be Katarina and Tristan, where he uses contracts or some other form to blackmail them. Although there is nothing bad with that, I would like to see some variation instead of straight up blackmailing. Other than that everything is pretty fine and deserving of a 4.6

Ok author it’s been only 6 chapters but the story is good as of now and has potential. Problems/suggestions There were minor problems with the old mans’ POV where the stars are placed incorrectly, but that’s a minor issue and can be fixed easily. Another issue in my opinion is the time skips, although they are not bad the way you show them kinda ruins the flow of the novel. Instead of the () you should try to ingrain into the story by using some prepositions It would be amazing if you could clear up who is who since I don’t know the difference between alec and draco, as well as the og mc. To cap it off I would say that the writing is better than some other novels, although the story has been used before in this website, I haven’t found a original novel with two diff extras, and I think it’s confusing a little but it still piqued my intrigue. It needs some tweaking, but I think it’s pretty good as of now, and hope it stays that way. Some might think it’s a little early for a review, but I just wanna leave some of the problems I saw grammatically, as the story hasn’t developed much yet

Thanks!

Thanks for the chapter!

Amazing!!!

This man hot af A+ charm, that’s crazy

Let’s goo a solid male character

Cool, just checking, but I have another question? Cans elven bloodlines be like dragons or other mythical beasts, since this line alluded to some thing “From the den of wolves will rise a phoenix carrying the brilliance of fire”

Author it’s not really a review but a question. Will you have previous Mc as the antagonist, because I think that would be cool to see, and honest to god the prequels ending was top tier and I hope it all rounds