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BIank_1yrCommentedWow..
Every utterance of his voice is as deep and vast as the expanse above. A chant-like chorus of voices shouting and singing harmonized to create a symphony of a god descending into the mortal world.- BIank_1yrCommented
My sly boy
The band that covered the mountainous things she calls breasts barely did anything to hide her thumb-thick nipples and her saucer-sized areola. Bast's meaty thighs were on display for all to see. As she made her way to me with just a step, I got an "up-skirt" view of her nether regions, and man I almost caught a nosebleed. - BIank_1yrCommentedThis paragraph has been deleted.
- BIank_1yrCommentedCh 4 Chapter 4: A Defiant 2nd Layer
- BIank_1yrCommentedCh 3 Chapter 3: Two Weeks of Hell
- BIank_1yrCommentedCh 2 Chapter 2: Class
- BIank_1yrCommented
Typo, wither -> whether.
The last demonic spiritualist in Ivar's family was from over a hundred years ago, and like most demon spiritualists he kept a journal to pass, and his predecessors' legacies down to future generations. Every member of Ivar's family wither demon spiritualist, warrior, or simple farmer is able to read these legacies. These legacies chronicles several of his ancestors rise from 1st layer trainee to Rank 3, with every demonic spirit they used, every skill and spell they learned, and their understandings on how to breakthrough to the 4th Rank were carefully recorded and passed down. Over the years many families in the city collected legacies from other families and from other cities, making the Demonic Spiritualist profession well known to everyone. - BIank_1yrCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1: Ivar
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Thanks for the feedback! I shall rewrite this thanks to your help.
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