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Victor_Uchiha_5235

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  • Victor_Uchiha_5235
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    Read it, that's all i asked pleaseeeeeeeeee

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    A series of Heartbreaking Events
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  • Victor_Uchiha_5235
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    Wow, this book is quite a ride! It's a cool mashup of sci-fi and fantasy that keeps you on your toes. The whole idea of chasing immortality using science is super fresh and interesting Ted and his wife's journey from old scientists to rejuvenated warriors in a whole new world is just wow! It's emotional, it's exciting, and it's got me hooked. The world of Warrior's Elysium is amazingly detailed, and the cultivation system brings a unique twist. The political drama that's hinted at promises some great action ahead. The writing is top-notch. It's descriptive but not overly so, it's action-packed, and it really gets you inside the characters' heads. And those cliffhangers? Absolute page-turners! In a nutshell, this book is an exciting, thought-provoking adventure. It's a great start to what promises to be a fantastic series. Can't wait for more!

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    ETERNAL EXISTENCE WITHIN THE SYSTEM
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  • Victor_Uchiha_5235
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    Your descriptions were on point too! I could visualize the forest, feel the strange sensations in Han Jinhai's new body, and almost touch the mystic system screen. It was like I was right there in the Warrior's Elysium. But that cliffhanger, oh man! You've got me hooked and curious. What's behind the door? I need to find out!

    Ch 2 The System
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  • Victor_Uchiha_5235
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    The introduction of the system and the whole concept of cultivation added a whole new level of complexity to the story. It was like I stepped into a different universe, and I can't wait to explore more of it.

    Ch 2 The System
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  • Victor_Uchiha_5235
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    My heart was pounding when he woke up in this unfamiliar world, scrambling to understand what's going on. His desperation to find his wife got me all emotional. I was like, "Hang in there, man. You've got this!"

    Ch 2 The System
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    ETERNAL EXISTENCE WITHIN THE SYSTEM
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  • Victor_Uchiha_5235
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    All in all, Chapter 1 set the stage for an epic adventure. It was engaging, emotional, and left me eager for more. Awesome start, and I can't wait to see where the journey takes us next!

    Ch 1 THE BEGINNING AFTER THE END
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  • Victor_Uchiha_5235
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    The pacing felt just right too. There was a nice balance between the slower, detailed moments and the sudden, shocking events. Your writing style? Loved it! It was clear, immersive and I felt like I was right there with the characters, experiencing their triumphs and fears

    Ch 1 THE BEGINNING AFTER THE END
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  • Victor_Uchiha_5235
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    The moment they transformed and became young again was a game-changer. It's like, wow, they did it! But then, what's next? That big question makes me want to dive right into the next chapter.

    Ch 1 THE BEGINNING AFTER THE END
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  • Victor_Uchiha_5235
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    Wow, Chapter 1 was a wild ride! I was hooked from the get-go. The idea of using science to achieve immortality is a super cool concept. It's fresh, intriguing, and sets your story apart.

    Ch 1 THE BEGINNING AFTER THE END
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  • Victor_Uchiha_5235
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    Chapter 3 really pulled me in! I loved the way the tension was building with each revelation during the confession game. I mean, who would have thought Belle and Todd were in a secret relationship? It made me feel the same shock and anger as the main character. And the hint of supernatural with the strange rules added a nice touch of mystery and horror that kept me on the edge of my seat. This chapter got me really excited to see how the characters will deal with all the emotional drama and the strange happenings around them. Can't wait to dive into the next chapter!

    Ch 4 The bedtime is 11pm
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  • Victor_Uchiha_5235
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    So far it has being really really good, I loved the addition of suspense but I would like it if the writer explains what we can't like the world, surrounding and everything

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    The SleepOver
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  • Victor_Uchiha_5235
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    Overall, Chapter 2 effectively deepens the plot and character relationships, and keeps the reader engaged with its mix of mystery and interpersonal drama but it would be better if the writer gives a more detailed explanation on where they are. like location and stuff

    Ch 3 " Make sure to whisper when it's late so you don't wake up the parents. "
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    The SleepOver
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