"You may think you're terrifying, but I am a mother, and since you dare threaten my child—" Viora fused her mana into her sword. "I'll be the most imposing creature you will ever face."
Turning her back to me, she revealed a massive claw scratch across her back, blood dripping from the wound. The dust from the destruction of the wall veiled the presence of the beast, but it's glowing eyes remained visible through the haze. With bated breath, Viora steadied herself, preparing to face the beast again.
This is my review, as a friend, I'm really proud of this! I love the balances of comedy, emotional, and action in this novel. I also love the characters, they are such a joy to read! Especially, Garen!! Anyway, this is very promising, Ngl. Keep it up!!