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DaoistAr72Zh1mthReplied to Daoists7udMyWell the dad is not happy, but some lines aren’t crossed
"Even if I wanted to do something so scandalous, I would not be able to. The conscriptions selection process is handled by an advanced artificial intelligence based in the capital. I have no right to interfere with its decision. I know you care about the little mutant, but his fate is out of my hands."- DaoistAr72Zh1mthReplied to FerriticMatrix
Or not 😜
The way all those nude ladies fought to fill their drooling snatch with the thick rods, their heavy asses lewdly smashing against the chiseled groins of the expectant men each time they sat down, producing wet slapping sounds and perhaps even a satisfied moan. - DaoistAr72Zh2mthCommented
Where you even get these ideas 💡🔥
The way all those nude ladies fought to fill their drooling snatch with the thick rods, their heavy asses lewdly smashing against the chiseled groins of the expectant men each time they sat down, producing wet slapping sounds and perhaps even a satisfied moan. - DaoistAr72Zh2mthCommented
😈 author is some good like kink writer 🔥
In some of those groups, women were being bent over and filled all three ways like a stuffed turkey, only able to occasionally let out a grunt through their flared noses. - DaoistAr72Zh2mthCommented
🔥🔥🔥 author is a man of honour
"Charles! I really... really like you... But Yui Hatano knows she's not good enough for you! Yui does not ask for anything. Charles, can you let me thank you in my own way, even if it's just once?" - DaoistAr72Zh2mthCommented
Then just become his loyal pet 😈
"Charles, don't be too hard on yourself... Yui... Yui Hatano, it's not worth it!" A tear fell from the corner of Yui Hatano's eye. - DaoistAr72Zh2mthCommented
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Alexander, however, pushed him away, saying righteously, "I told you not to stop me. I, Charles, live uprightly all my life! How can I watch a beautiful woman like Yui Hatano perish like this, and watch everyone die before me? This first spot is mine!" - DaoistAr72Zh2mthCommented
Noo don’t let the pornstar die first 😭 that’s the Pornstar or?
He was chosen third, the first to see the patient was Yui Hatano, followed by the man who was like a mad dog. - DaoistAr72Zh2mthCommented
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"My name is Hatano Yuki, and I'm a porn actress. I was working, and I don't know why, but I got transported here. However, for the last leg of life, I'm glad to have you all as companions." - DaoistAr72Zh2mthCommented
Don’t worry, it’s called a grandma complex 👵🏻
{A/n:: I've been jokingly accused of having a preference for Women with silver or white hair, and well, I can't entirely deny it... - DaoistAr72Zh3mthCommented
Haha why not directly conclude the book like that. I jumped around, fought, became the strongest, plucked some flowers, got old, settled, and died of old age.
For the first year, all I did was train like crazy with Sylvia, and for the last two years, I have been hopping on different continents, collecting different hero's items, saving important characters, and building up a name for myself. - DaoistAr72Zh3mthCommented
For sure, feel like author is making us, better have flashbacks about it later on
● "Aphrodite's Bloodline" - DaoistAr72Zh3mthPosted
- DaoistAr72Zh3mthPosted
Story very similar to a certain anime indeed. Maybe too similar… But the writing quality is difficult. You completely lost me in volume 2. They fight and next chapter we are in an academy, and then suddenly we meet someone and get to know there was a 15 years time jump, ok. And then it jumps again without concluding the meeting, and meeting someone else and then we are back in academy life again without concluding the meeting. Btw you did not even explain the world setting. These jumps make it an unreadable for me.
- DaoistAr72Zh3mthPosted
Author I really like your book. The story is creative, it has enough lemons while Stile having a funny story line. So Prost for that! But I also notice that you implement new ideas into the story without checking if these are consistent with the already written story. Like who the MCs and his Sisters parents are. There are a lot of holes once this gets revealed.
- DaoistAr72Zh4mthCommented
Never noticed it before, but you need an editor
"Yes! Go more crazy, come little closer so I can embrace you." - DaoistAr72Zh6mthCommented
But she’s basically also doing the same? Just wanting to get more then some gold for a night…. Smells dirty
In fact, it was Lady Felicia who forced her to leave by handing her a bag of money and saying these biting words, 'It would be too shameful for a nobleman's wife to have a whore for a mother. Please disappear and never contact me again, Do not ruin your daughter's life again." - DaoistAr72Zh6mthReplied to nimko