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Devor_34413mthCommentedGraduating in just 1 semester contradicts this paragraph.
Teacher Shuzo had arranged it like this for a reason; he didn't want the two he favored to attract too much attention, nor did he want their outstanding performance to pressure or overshadow the other students in the class.- Devor_34414mthCommented
He left the wrapped beef on the counter?
As Joon drifted into a restful sleep. With the wrapped gifts patiently waiting on the counter and the warmth of a delightful meal shared, Joon felt a sense of fulfillment and anticipation for the meaningful day ahead. - Devor_34417mthCommented
He is already in the last year of the academy and they just began teaching transformation jutsu?
Unbeknownst to them, the night quickly passed, and the sun was already shining in the ninja world, with many people waking up to return to their routines. In the end, the father-son duo stopped training, leaving a 12-year-old boy lying on the ground, exhausted. - Devor_34419mthCommented
This novel goes, I saw a frog in my yard now it is my loyal companion. I caught a fish now it's my loyal companion. I don't care about other people in the village but I will protect my frog and fish with all I have because I have been with them for 2 weeks and they are loyal. I let a girl in my house let her sleep in my room for a night the next day I gave her a fish now we are in love with each other because of this I want to be stronger to be with her. -- Maybe next time he meets a beautiful girl and gives her candy then they fall in love. 😂😂
Ch 7 Chapter 7: Goodbyes - Devor_34419mthCommented
He would rather die so that no harm would reach the loyal frog and fish. 😂😂
And Big. T and Big. F, my two loyal friends. They deserved my protection, and I would do anything for them. - Devor_344110mthCommented
starting from here itachi became sasuke. 😂
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Well if we count it in days because there have been no indication of time skips its an estimate of a week or less.
(A/N: I think he's only been in the world about a week or two, but I don't know for sure) - Devor_344110mthCommented
Its wasting the potential of sharingan. With only one eye the power of sharingan is halved.
"Wow! At that time, I will have the Tenseigan in my left eye and Rinnegan in my right eye! Plus I am still Nine Tails Jinchūriki! Then who could be my opponent in this ninja world?! Keke, except for Ōtsutsuki Kaguya and Sage of Six Paths..." - Devor_344110mthCommented
*Minato Namikaze
Minato Uzumaki's appointment as the Fourth Hokage had the advantage of not having his own faction. After assuming office, he needed to establish his own political allies, and the previous Hokage's faction was perfect for that purpose. - Devor_344110mthPosted
the story is passable but like many other chinese authors they keeps repeating sentenses in different paragraphs just to make what was supposed to be in 1 - 2 chapters into more chaptes that honestly kills the joy in reading the story.
detailWe Agreed to Brag Together, But You Secretly Dominated the WorldEastern · Mountain Birds Don't Like Fish - Devor_344110mthCommented
it was mentioned in the ealier chapters that they were 13 when they destroyed the marine base and that was 5 years ago. please correct the inconsistencies.
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