Thx for the chapter.

An interesting start so far.

There is not much to say, but if you want an enjoyable and immersive experience, then you should give this a try. Also, if you have issues, please share them.

This is a high-quality novel that anyone can enjoy. It's rare to see a novel this good on a webnovel, but that's a great blessing. Also, if you want to read something in your spare time, please give the system a read and review.

If you want well-developed side characters, villains, magnificent world-building, and a great main character, read this. In all honesty, though, this is a story I greatly enjoyed making and want to share with the world.

I only liked 2 system novels before reading this, orv and shadow slave but after reading i have been missing out. All this is tier 1 when it comes to webnovels and is the highest degree of writing this site has to offer. Overral very good story, interesting characters and a ever molding world this story is truly a masterpiece. ( I'm to lazy to edit the grammar.)

Peak fiction

Just this first chapter has a feeling I've never seen in any webnovel on this app. The quality of writing is amazing, and I can already see how real the characters are. I will write a review when you write around 15 chapters. This is the start of a masterpiece.

This is good also this is your tenth review so its time for you to get popular I feel as the characters grow and the main characters world and ideologies shape in unexplored ways, this is a great novel.

Its not a perfect novel by the first chapter alone, but i do have faith in it though so yea, make sure to adjust the pacing and fix up the flow and not start with his name alot.

also 1 chapter a day

Shameless author I think the novel is good and if you want to write anything write something that I'm doing bad/ good in I wanna improve so yea I guess.