I don't know if I spelled the words above correctly. But, yeah. I'm a DxD fan, and I like most of the girls from that creation, and Rias was no exception. Did the fact that I'm a fan of Ichiei Ishibumi surprise you?

Complaining means the character has sympathy and fans. I am a much, much bigger fan of Dxd than I am of Marvel. I sympathize with Rias, know her character, and empathize accordingly. Now imagine me reading this chapter, how the MC behaved and what Hela did to Rias. Now answer the question of who Hela is to Rias. Rias's POV, please.

I'm sorry, but I'm going to stop reading this fanfic. The author clearly loves the Marvel universe more than DxD. And I'm not one to take a girl's virginity lightly. Especially when the process involves characters I feel sympathy for.

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I see. Miko, poor thing. Ei has just returned and is about to go to another world, leaving Inazuma behind (at least in the two versions of this story). The question is how Miko will get revenge, perhaps by releasing a new book starring Ei. Interesting~

I think the point of the traveler's story will be lost if Ei goes "with her/him". Plus, as an author, you'll be backing yourself into a corner. I mean, creatively. Without the traveler, there will be plenty of opportunities for plot inconsistencies, and you'll be able to refer to the fact that Ei changed the story a bit, so what happened happened. In my opinion, a story about Ei's daily life in Teyvat is fine. With the caveat that you want to keep the story of the traveler. P.S. English is not my language, sorry.

Koutetsujou no Kabaneri: Mumei This girl will fit perfectly into your story.