Well I was surfing Web Novel and discovered a new story of the DxD universe so I thought to myself let's check it out.... first two chapters were ok and then the author introduced all the main characters going to kouh academy. BIG FUCKING SURPRISE!!!!! 🤬 For once I would like an author to actually change the story to not follow the same f****** bland "oh look he gets involved with Rias in her peerage and eventually falls in love with her or something...". Seriously can one author at least be somewhat original when it comes to these stories. I mean off the back he dislikes devils and then as soon as he starts getting to know her he likes them. Come on be original do something different for once.

congratulations another author has ruined another story. I am deleting this from my reading list because you have apparently no idea where you going with the story.

Agreed! Once more when the bad guys are about to get killed, oh look a twist, someone comes along to save them, beats the MC and they get away with their crime....😑

Sounds interesting. Can't wait to read it.

I think you set your auto translate to the wrong language....

first I'd like to say love your story I'm always looking forward to the next chapter update. second ignore the naysayers it's your story you update and write it how you like to. and third heck yeah another new story from a great author thanks man

A great artist has passed....we will always remember him for the joy he brought into our hearts. R.I.P. Toriyama.

I have no clue what this story is about. Also I can't tell what the gender for any of the characters are expect for MHA cast.

please go back and fix your story I can't tell where the sentences start and with their sentences in

At least no one was injured.

When I first discovered this story I thought It be interesting new spin if you will an old tail so I started the first chapter... I'm sorry it wasn't a chapter it was an abbreviation of the chapters to come and the next one was the same and so was the one after that. then you finally get to the chapter that starts the story and you discover that it's also just pathetic. Great story idea just bad presentation my advice start over again and think it through this time.

You just focused on getting better. Ignore those idiots who think the world revolves around them.

I was liking it then the newest chapter came out.... I am now deleting it from my reading list

I see if you want to do a crossover with a story go right ahead

I picked this story to read because it caught my attention, but when I go to read there's nothing but useless information. You could have placed all ten chapters into one and then start the story. my suggestion, if you decide to listen to it, start over and try again.

Ok WTF? If you're having trouble with the story just start over and try again. Seriously, 33 chapters of gibberish.

I say star over and make the chapters longer.

When I saw this story, I thought it was going to be a good one. Then I started to read it and I can only say, WTF. The very first paragraph has already made my head hurt in trying to understand anything. I hope this was just a mishap and will be fixed in the future.