Am really liking the story. However, if you want an brutally honest critique, I have to admit that you are lacking in the non character interactions/details. By this I’m referring to things like: he is spending gold, spirit crystals, spirit stones left and right, where did he get them?; he found that spacial ring in the remanint, what happened with it, what was in it?; he collected all those spirit herbs and spirit essences, does he still have them, will he use them?. Sorry if I sound nit picking or anything. All that aside, this is an excellent book, and I encourage you to continue it!!!