Honestly, The first 20 chapters were pretty decent. I enjoyed my read up until then but.. Soon after? I just couldn't get back into the story the moment time travel was introduced. Not a fan of it, I suppose. I only made it roughly to chapter 29, unfortunate as I did enjoy the story up until this point. The author has some work to do with descriptive writing but otherwise, things are fine. The battle scene's are mostly bland, truth be told, but it gets the job done. Overall rating, I'd Say my total score is accurate! If you don't mind time travel in anyway, Give this a read!

Machine translated, A lot of " Chinese " novels end up like this. Translated by a real group until it's " Signed " and can make money, then straight to Machine translations. All we can do is mass report and hope the translation groups take back over.

Started out great but soon once you reach chapter 41 ( I checked on another website to see if it was worth it ) the entire novel becomes Machine translated. It's not even on the better side of things either, completely ruins the entire novel. IMO, Pick it up until around chapter 40 and move on. 8/10 Disappointed.

Enjoying the story, good stuff so far. Keep it up!

Pretty quality read here, truth be told. Can't think of to many gripes, honestly? The ones I have are completely Negligible to the good story. Romance / erotic chapters but, they're still good. Didn't quite enjoy ( Near the beginning ) what happened once we left the first planet, But it is what it is, I also understand why it happened. Overall? Give this a read. You'll enjoy your time, it's a great novel to pick up and enjoy if you like DB / DBZ related fanfics. Unlike the other hard to enjoy novels of the same genre, at least this author does well to keep things close to DB as possible, when it comes to saiyans ( How strong they are, or how they power up - etc, How they utilize Ki, all of it seems pretty close to how it should be. Well, to an extent anyways, Nothing is perfect! )

Pretty good story so far, In my opinion. Down side is that it DOES become Machine translated and not at all translated by a human. You can see this in many cases when dialog is repeated consistently, like " Bullied and Bullied ". <-- Example. Truth be told, It's not to noticeable until they talk about the power scaling and/or some cultivation techniques where the Machine translation fails horribly with those. The only other gripe I sort of have is how even the most basic chapter arcs take 4-6 chapters to get through before we move on, Conversations normally repeat themselves here and there to extend the number of " chapters " involved. In some parts, it's not bad. Adds more details to the story and world building but in some... Like casual conversation... It becomes quite the headache as it drones on and on. Otherwise, Honestly, It's pretty bearable! A great read with tons of updates. Will keep you busy and satisfied, In my opinion.

Decent story so far, enjoying it! Only bone I have so far is the Ki training, oddly enough. Just doesn't seem.. " DB " at all. --- Outside of that, I really hope our MC isn't to " strong ", It sort of seems like he's super powerful right from the get-go as a saiyan, which is odd. I know PL is ignored later in the DB stages but, What would be the rough estimate the MC started with before his weight training?