Thanks!

The writing is alright, but a single chapter can't say much about your novel. Also maybe increase the word count of the chapter to at least 2000 words if it's not a prologue.

Thanks for the review, the new chapter is out.

Alrighty

I'll just be blunt about this. Everything about it is fine for the most part but world background needs to be further expanded along with character design

Mhm

thanks

understandable. I'll see what I'll do in the next chapter.

the progression of your story feels a bit off, like the story keeps bouncing around many places at once chapter to chapter. the updates are stable, no doubt about it. character and world background are good but the chapters should be much longer.

The only advice I can give, is to further develop the characters in the next chapter. As far as I can see, rewriting the current chapter doesn't seem like a good idea to flesh them out. ^^ll

Well same case here, I only managed to create 2 chapters just last month during the holidays and another chapter just yesterday. So I understand the lack of time. Hopefully you'll be able to continue soon enough in the future tho.

Excellent writing quality but character design is a bit barebones and I don't think your story is stable just yet. (The score on the stability of updates is subject to change)