Bumslayer88
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Bumslayer881mthReplied to God_Ofshowsor maybe he’s following the comic more? weirdo?
When he turned his gaze, he couldn't help but feel somewhat confused. A blonde girl with short hair down to her shoulders was smiling pleasantly at him.- Bumslayer881mthCommented
think he has so much going on already with storm release, uzumaki kekai genkais and fuinjutsu that giving him a tailed beast is too much work. Should flesh out all the other stuff you’ve given him in my opinion.
I'm thinking a little ahead in the story right now but I was just wondering what your guys thoughts are on having Shiran become the jinchuriki of the 3 tails. I know it's a little cliche to have the MC be a jinchuriki which is why I don't want to do something that the majority of people won't like :P (Regardless of what happens he will be strong as hell) - Bumslayer881mthReplied to Oniisama
something about his emotions being duller than they should be from using it to form his magic and how it’s slowly correcting itself
-You yourself know, or rather, you learned that my problem is gradually correcting itself. Yes, it will not be fast, and it will take more than a dozen years, but it will improve. And I don't want to waste the best time for development for the sake of my problems. - Bumslayer882mthCommented
what does that tattoo look like
He walks to the bathroom, where he starts unbuttoning his shirt and we see a tattoo on his back and arms.... Goes on to take a shower where we get a better view of the tattoo covering his back... - Bumslayer882mthCommentedCh 11 CH - 9 - American Duos - Part - One
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pls continue
Hello everyone I'm happy for all the comments I have received over the couple of chapters that I have made for this story but based on the reviews I'm getting I'm getting a decent amount of negative ones so do let me know if you guys want me to continue this one or not? - Bumslayer884mthCommented
great fight scene, follows really well with the pictures and you put a good twist different from the trailer :)
This was hard to write. While I did have an amazing trailer to help me with this, it isn't a carbon copy. Show some love please.