This story is such a thrilling experience, love the relationships, love the story telling maybe the only downside is how little we go into Goku and how he is a combo of a random person (SI), Luffy and obviously Goku tho there are only 13 chapters at the time of this review hopefully in the future we'll go more in depth about the topic. great job author keep the chapters flowing🤗

thanks for the chapter, and thank you for making them longer before they were way too Short you couldn't enjoy them properly but now it's getting somewhere. keep it up!!

best of luck wish u a healthy sleep cycle

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Keep it up my MAN. i love how well you made the characters in this and i have to know is that eri girl inspired by that other eri girl in my hero academia? cus shes so cute i wanna drown her in blankets and watch cars 1 all the way through 3[img=recommend]

man I don't know about anybody else but me but this hole q and a thing made you feel like a funny and wholesome guy or girl I don't know if you ever specified that... but anyway keep going imma re read this story cus i love the start of this. big kiss 😘 from uncle Lons

Big respect for not having harem

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pla don't it ruins a story and if not executed perfectly it feels majorly unrealistic and wrong

this is very well done keep up the work😁👍

no harem already enough storys out there with harems in them. harems are such a turn off in terms off reading

ok I suppose I will respect your decision 👍

pls pls pls i begg of you don't make it harem!!!!!!!!

love this story it's honestly the best sport/football fic on this site keep it up bigman👍

i don't care about all the mindless criticism that doesn't give the author any info what to improve on . i personally love this and hope you never stop releaseing chapter's best DP fic on this site much better than the "reborn as raditz" and definitely better than "i am gohan"

love how you wrote this can't wait dor more chapter's😁⚡

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