? This is just animals he's killed and discretely gathered into a ritual. He doesn't actually kill anyone until chapter 14-15.

It's strange you try to give a realistic depiction of how someone from the modern age would act if placed in GoT but in the sentence before complain about having no reincarnation backstory or "cheats". Reincarnation backstories are the things I hate most about fanfics. They always use some contrived reason to reincarnate the MC into a fantasy world with "cheats". The inclusion of God like entities that give wishes to people is just a bad way to write a backstory. I hope you drop this and don't waste your time because this clearly isn't meant for you.

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lololololololol. I was trying to think of a good backstory but I genuinely couldn't think of anything.

Just drop it.

Just drop it. My dialogue won't get any better and I haven't planned out the story.

Ong. I really hope she doesn't become a reoccurring character because she's actually annoying.

I'm not going to lie. I took me like two hours to write the latest chapter I just suck at writing consistently.

I was going by the appearance of them in GoT, but they should be in their late 20's to early 30's.

It's a fanfic bruh.

Thank you, even though the wolf magic thing is the least original and most basic thing that almost every GoT fanfic has.

If I'm being completely honest. I had a very different idea for what type of person Jon would be at the beginning of this story. Originally he was supposed to be a good person but now he's more like Little Finger rather than Jon from the books or show. I decided to change the role that Catelyn plays in the story. For what I have planned now, Arya, Sansa and Catelyn will become important while Rob and Ned will die. This will likely change as I haven't decided what to do with Bran yet as he is a very strange character.

I don't know grammer bruh

I probably won't don't worry. I just have trouble staying invested which is why I want ideas.

Go check out my other novel and leave me ideas for future events in the story since I've already gotten bored of it.

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Already a bit better than Jaime? Eddard Stark? You have to be joking.

No. He's been a guard of Winterfell since the first chapter which is multiple years before the most recent chapter. In that time he has slowly taken over more of the responsibilities of master at arms since everyone expects him to take that position in the future. The men are more loyal to him over Eddard because he is one of them. He is a guard of Winterfell, he spends far more time with them and has dedicated most of his life to training alongside them.

The Reach is the place with the most knights and tourneys. It's also the place in all of the seven kingdoms where the faith of 7 is most practiced, something which is necessary to be involved in if Jon wants to be a knight.

You have to be trolling. Ain't no way.