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Kayleren

Kayleren

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Suffering builds the character

2022-12-19 JoinedGlobal
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  • Kayleren
    Kayleren3mth
    Posted

    Shameless Author is here to leave a good review and sneak back ;} You can leave your comments and questions below, and I will answer as much as I can. This book is about a man named Ashy who finds himself in a ruined world covered with darkness, where the sun is weak and the sky is too dark to see the clouds. Plus, humanity is at the end of its rope against the monsters — both intelligent and not — and betrayers. It is a classic dark fantasy but I won't add any disturbing things like r*pe, etc. Novels are for enjoyment after all. Anyway, Ashy is a suspicious man without any expectations from life. However, he has a wild imagination, a strong desire to survive, and usually makes drastic and most of the time questionable choices in this ruined world. But in the core, he is a pretty nice guy. Well, you know, this is weak to strong. So, Ashy is weak at the start but he becomes strong and unique in his class. He might one-shot weaker enemies later on but other fights will be hard, physically, mentally (heh), and ability-wise. By the way, there will be romance and I assure you it won't be cheap, dull, or cringe, but! It will be a slow one. Don't even think about a harem! There won't harem, definitely not, over my dead body!

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  • Kayleren
    Kayleren3mth
    Replied to DevilDarkness

    Oops...my bad...

    God's Game: I Can Alter My Appearance
    Urban · DevilThree
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  • Kayleren
    Kayleren4mth
    Posted

    Hey hey hey hey! This book is about a fat and shy otaku getting handsome and strong with his system! I understand you guys are so excited over this that your fat dancing alongside with you, but wait a second and listen to me. Yes, there is more, the mc even has an online girlfriend that is obsessed with him! Woohoo! Exciting right? Sorry but not sorry, you guys' only girlfriend is your dominant hand and lotion. But! At least you can find hope while reading this book! Maybe, I mean maybe, you guys even get a girlfriend (in your dreams) too!

    God's Game: I Can Alter My Appearance
    Urban · DevilThree
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  • Kayleren
    Kayleren4mth
    Commented

    Thirst trap! Don't get deceived shut-in-kun!

    [KarmaCat- Hubby, I miss you. When will you come to Pearl City? It has been a year since we met already. Can't you just take some time out of your busy schedule and visit me once? Just for a moment! You don't even need to spend much time with me, I just want to see you, touch you, hug you.]
    God's Game: I Can Alter My Appearance
    Urban · DevilThree
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  • Kayleren
    Kayleren4mth
    Commented

    Dayum, he is delusional too

    She was literally obsessed with him, while he, being an insensitive, insecure, dumb, and dirty prick, didn't give her back even 1% of the love she gave him.
    God's Game: I Can Alter My Appearance
    Urban · DevilThree
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  • Kayleren
    Kayleren4mth
    Commented

    Such a failure of a human being, tsk! Tsk!

    Ch 2 Otaku's Bane
    God's Game: I Can Alter My Appearance
    Urban · DevilThree
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  • Kayleren
    Kayleren5mth
    Commented

    I mean... How did a superhuman/valorin got stabbed by a measly villager?

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  • Kayleren
    Kayleren5mth
    Commented

    Development is quick, too quick

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  • Kayleren
    Kayleren5mth
    Commented

    I feel like she is not a child but a mature adult, dunno if it is intentional

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  • Kayleren
    Kayleren5mth
    Commented

    I think it would be nicer if you had slowly given Aero's backstory. Although it isn't forced etc, it would be nice to let out his story with little parts so that readers could have some theories. Plus, you need to use more comma

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  • Kayleren
    Kayleren10mth
    Commented

    Yes

    It was kind of creepy. 'Are all authors strange like that?'
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    Fantasy · Haethanwrites
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  • Kayleren
    Kayleren11mth
    Replied to Shateralyn

    Thanks for your gift :)

    Ch 1 Rude Narrator
    Villain: Puppeteer Narrator
    Fantasy · Kayleren
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  • Kayleren
    Kayleren11mth
    Replied to Percent_Grader

    That is a bit changes according to guard or soldier who found the criminal. If they think that the criminal might be useful, they might use it as a soldier or send to deathcrow. As a cowards, Sebastian wasn't that useful.

    Ch 15 Colorful sight
    Villain: Puppeteer Narrator
    Fantasy · Kayleren
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  • Kayleren
    Kayleren11mth
    Replied to Rengoz

    Yaa, no romance probably in 200 chapters

    "This is the story of Silas' journey to becoming divine." A man garbed in a white, pure robe said as if he was telling a story. 
    Villain: Puppeteer Narrator
    Fantasy · Kayleren
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  • Kayleren
    Kayleren11mth
    Replied to Roachman

    That is too complicated for Auriel, but probably he can in the future

    Now, Auriel could easily move this puppet like a real human making it impossible to differentiate this being from a living doll. Though he didn't put any of his strings to this puppet's tongue and mouth. So, Auriel couldn't make the puppet speak. 
    Villain: Puppeteer Narrator
    Fantasy · Kayleren
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  • Kayleren
    Kayleren11mth
    Replied to Percent_Grader

    Ya, he has a reference. When he was the narrator he was mostly sensing everything Silas felt. So, he sensed natural pressure of the power houses too

    Or he would be a Transcendent powerhouse in the future as Auriel sensed that the presence of Clint was equal to a Grandmaster instead of a Transcendent.
    Villain: Puppeteer Narrator
    Fantasy · Kayleren
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  • Kayleren
    Kayleren11mth
    Replied to SnowApathie

    Maybe a little but not so much. You can think like rhythm, if you listen to the same rhythm, that can bore you early. If you read similar-length sentences in succession that too can bore you. So it is advised to vary the sentence length.

    Ch 1 The Scarlet Forest.
    The Prison Called Life 我
    Fantasy · Haethanwrites
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  • Kayleren
    Kayleren11mth
    Replied to Haethanwrites

    I understand you, so I will give you too basic explanation. I am an average webnovel reader, my attention span is low and my memory is trash. And as an average webnovel reader, I forgot what you explained in the info dump... In justa few days...

    Ch 5 Intertwind Memories-II
    The Prison Called Life 我
    Fantasy · Haethanwrites
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  • Kayleren
    Kayleren11mth
    Replied to Ashborn1609

    Lol. Auriel doesn't used to sleep lightly and his senses aren't that good for him to wake up when someone comes near to him. As for the important scenes... Well, they are happening because he is sleeping, or else Asher wouldn't do something or get closer to Elise.

    Ch 43 Unnatural trust
    Villain: Puppeteer Narrator
    Fantasy · Kayleren
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  • Kayleren
    Kayleren11mth
    Replied to Junni_MC

    Thanks for your generous support, I appreciate it :)

    Ch 45 Mia
    Villain: Puppeteer Narrator
    Fantasy · Kayleren
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