this is really good 😊. can't wait for the next chapter

Very smooth story progression 👌. love the way you bring the characters to life in each chapter Well done 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏