I get you trying to fix this problem like that, but why don't update the 2 parts of the chapter the same day? Why make us wait even more time for a full chapter? The problem is your chapters are long, ok divide them but don't update the parts in different days, just update the chapter in two parts the same day, then problem fixed. I don't get why wouldn't you update the full chapter the same day, just in two parts. I get having to do that if the chapters weren't done, but you already have the chapters so divide them in two parts and update them the same day, problem with commenting paragraphs fixed, why make the time for a full chapter longer? Before this we mostly got a full chapter every three days, now we will get it every 4 days, so instead of two chapters in 6 days we will get them in 8 and so on and on.

Just the last thing I will say is, you updated chapter 106 here on webnovel 15 days ago. In 15 days you have updated here 3 chapters, only 3, instead of the 5 that should have been updated, because your update here is 1 every 3 days. The worst thing is you missed two updates with chapters already done, it is just copy paste and upload and somehow you think it's fine to take even more time to update here because you couldn't update to your paying members... When I found this story months ago it was great, the moment you wrote a new chapter it was uploaded, you followed your schedule most of the time, but since this story that started free joined the patr-eon stories, you miss more updates, take more time with chapters already done, and even is keeping exclusive content of the story, content that we will never see. Man is frustrating as fuck tbh.

Wow...10 days or more to update a chapter already updated on your patron for free. I mean I know they are paying you money but you already are giving them exclusive chapters, like the star wars revised script, and a Naruto story so a little something to the people that supported you with stones when this was free for all wouldn't be bad. At least you could have updated the chapters on time in webnovel since you know we are several chapters behind those on your patr-eon. I really miss the time when this was updated once every two days or later every three days, but now I fear the time between updates for free users would be more and more and it will reach a time where you would update here once a week if we are lucky. I have been reading this story for months but when you opened your patr-eon I feel like you have forgotten about us here. But I'm just a free reader of your story that could never support you with money so it seems I'm no longer your target audience, its my opinion at least

Thanks for the chapter, I prefer the chapter being from the POV of the MC, I don't mind small POVs or something from others in a chapter, but well a chapter once in a while from other POV is fine I guess. I just hope you don't make this kind of chapter without the MC's POV too frequently, but it's your story so if it helps you just do what you want.

She looks great

You should take the R18 tag off because it is misleading, since there is not a single +18 scene in all the chapters here. The translation is better done by mtl on the original, but at least you posted it here.

I don't know why you would rewrite your first chapters, they were fine when I read them 4 months ago, but you do you I guess. I just hope you don't enter the cicle of rewriting infinitely instead of uploading new chapters, like others authors that start doing reworks do. About this chapter, it felt shorter to me, it must be because of the time between updates making me think it would be bigger, but thanks for the chapter anyway. I really love your fic but don't usually write much reviews so don't mind too much what I say.

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This should be lvl 18, since he leveled it the previous chapter in the Necropolys. He said this class was harder to lvl up and that he only got 18 lvls on it, and because of that he chose a subclass, because it was faster to lvl it up.

I'm ok with Rae? If she is the only pairing then no, I don't like OCs as the main and only pairing of the MC. But if you add a little harem with Rae being in it, I won't mind her being with Ian, and it is pretty easy to do it too since you made her a cuckquean.

It's a nice story, a bit too slow at the beginning, since it takes more than 200 chapters for the MC to stop being a kid, but it's nice and it was getting even better but the author stopped updating the story so... A pity this story is now abandoned.

Like you said she is an OC, the relationship with her was always forced to me, so I don't really like her that much. It is also a fic where real actress exist, like Scarlett, so I would prefer if it has to be just one pairing for Ian, that it is at least someone known and not an OC. But you could just open the relationship for him, making him get an harem of sorts, I would like him getting an harem, but do what you want, you are the author.