I'll read this when it has more than a hundred chapters

maybe i’ll just wait until spirity

i was going to kill him off bc i thought he was annoying but then i was like wait hes kind of cute. and i still have plans on making his life harder for him ofc just not as worse as i use to think

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a deity means a god tho

its fine dw about it. but since he is the ruler of the underworld, that makes his some sort of deity too, no?

it’ll take a while for the title to match the story

i did have plans of killing him off but i got too attached to the character lol

i just read one quora post on how the guy got shot in the head and out of the eye and still managed to live

the start was interesting. a handful of grammatical errors here and there but that could be easily fixed. lovely book

Wdym

the main character is interesting but man’s got anger issues. but i guess that’s what makes the character interesting, his flaws. the plot is alright and frankly quite common but i would love to see where this leads to

I just would like to mention that main lead isn’t as mentally stable as he seems and i do have plans on making the story more darker in the future. anyways, if you wanna ask questions, do it here

my bad about that lol. just thought i should do that for the dream part.

the amount of envy i feel over this man’s english. the story is inspired by greek mythology, i think? the first-person perspective is well done. though, there are very minor (almost unnoticeable) errors, all is well

the writing style isnt just what i’m used to. the story’s interesting but confusing. the worldbuilding is *chef’s kiss* it’s amazing and ive only read the first chapter. the reason i’m stopping there is, well, the writing style is just confusing for me ;-;

tbf, the grammar isnt the best. there are a lot of unnecessary capital letters and such but i guess it’s readable for most. it couldve been better. thats literally the only problem i have with this. other than that, it’s cool