Restu_Ardyani_5834
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forgive me for my comment. this is probably overkill and I seem to be setting you up. maybe you want to go into more detail about what happened. But there are some things that I don't think need to be told. you have to focus on the main story. it will only make it too long and winding. I really look forward to your stories every day. it was fun writing all the stories of the characters. but it's not very efficient.
I may be selfish, but I prefer Ruto and Neoma's stories. their story is very unique to tell. too many goodbyes between them. not only that, there is more suffering than happiness. so make them face everything together. don't keep them away let alone add to the tragedy of life. I'm sure, many are waiting for the moment they fight together rather than apart.