btw can you remove the diamond marks it's annoying when I use the audio mode from webnovel. I really enjoy it while working

me also waiting

it's good like dam good

I am dying due to laughing bro hes hilarious 😂😂😂😂😂😂 its's 5 am and i can't Stop reading way better than your everyday Mc I love you author this is a masterpiece. Plus the flying meteor hilarious 😂😂😂😂😂

First please Ignore these people shouting this that late pacing and shit. If they want Op shitin 2 days of training there are plenty already. Author I really loved his interaction with the yamanaka Ino and her mom. It was peak the way Sauske and Ino talked to each other. it was as if Sasuke was shown through Ino's view. but he wasnr't but i as reader kinda felt how enigmatic he was in that chapter. Also hate Ino's mom shes's the mother fookin Yamanaka clan heads's wife she should have tried to offer sauske free flowers but sasuke should have rejected it. ch 29 is kinda mid tho cause Sauske was too honest revealing his ace. I had hoped he went bat shit when Ayame gave him the noodle just to seem like a dum kid but he didn't. kinda sadage

A letter to author san My favourite ff author the due points you said is true in a sense but it gave your story a different twist. dungeons were also good just not the part part you made scared gears and swords useless. Other than that I wished that Riser got some justice but no gonna lie that beat up had a different magic of its own. So scratch that. So all in all a solid 8 in story pacing was also fine although a little slow and sloppy here and there and i think bringing shuri back is also kinda meh but sure ff for a reason I guess.

I was mind boggled when I started reading it but now it has lost its's high quality due to lack details and Mc constantly talking unrelated shit I mean I really like his persona and his jokes but the story is super shit as of now. No new developments so far but I don't know how to describe it lacks depth or more of a kick.

if you have good ways to intrioduce that concept there maybe

Bro was assumed hero but jus a sec later got the demon clan 😭🤣🤣🤣

huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuubhhhhhhbhbb???????????

Please take care of yourself, Your health comes first. This comes from a fellow Indian as well. ahh and I been lurking around and like haven't commented at all. my bad but do take care

no nooooo god nooo please noooooooooooo!!!!!!? the forbidden code nooooooooooo

it's pretty good

is mc scheming again?

it's a solid 3 because of his jokes and personality but side characters lack depth mean author fails to capture their personality but Mc is big brain I like it but this story has a lot of plot holes unexplained/ doesn't make sense aheem yes I am looking at you Sona sitri's book shelf. And also his plot of bringing Lucifer is kinda lackin. All in all a rewrite with definitive reasons for what he does would do wonders for this story. Note not saying it is bad or anything I've seen worse here but this story has sooo muccccch and muccch more potential than this and this review is solely based on read at ch33

I been waiting !!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! come back !!!!!!!!!!!

seriously I would have never touched it if I read the synopsis ( I hate dxd) gfs but good dem I am happy that I gave it a go and I didn't regret it l.

keep em rooolin

satisfied af

thanks for the cappy yum yum 😋😋🤤🤤