Good story so far keep up the good work!

I'm just going to be blunt you need to slow down your making mistakes in your chapters. If you need longer to edit your chapters do so because this has been the worst chapter of the last three. I love your story its great but I'd rather it take longer for chapters that are great than faster and unreadable.

It's been utterly ridiculously amazing story and it's writer great. Ahem so with that being said MAKE ANOTHER STORY WE DEMAND ENTERTAINMENT!!!!!!