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Youssef_Ferchichi7mthPostedWhatever the hell happened to this story? It used to be so great, now it's just another power fantasy story with an uncaring MC who is somehow always in the right, the only thing this story lacks is a harem and it will be one of those terrible stories that I so desperately try to avoid on fanfic sites, I mean really, this isn't even a spider man story anymore, no more street level crime fighting, always teaming up with someone else and the MC has so many Superpowers it's absolutely ridiculous, his spider powers at this point are turned completely obsolete, hell the MC isn't a spider man anymore, he's just another Gary Stu-Ish OC who can never do wrong and the plot becomes completely stale and predictable, I mean really, there isn't any suspense in this fic at all, that's another reason why it's boring now. In short, this isn't a spider man story anymore, just another marvel power fantasy fanfic, don't waste your time on it.
- Youssef_Ferchichi11mthReplied to Beggar_of_FreedomCh 67 Castle Volkihar
- Youssef_Ferchichi11mthReplied to Skarlet_MalthaelEven if I was marked a 'villain' by others, I would be fine as long as I did what my conscience said.
- Youssef_Ferchichi11mthCommented
that's... a pretty cynical way of looking at it.
Because heroes were only heroes when people believed them to be. - Youssef_Ferchichi11mthReplied to Cha_D_Bear
the joker is evil no matter from which angle you view his actions, dude just wants to see the world burn.
One villain was a hero to another and vice versa. - Youssef_Ferchichi1yrCommented
AYO!!!!
My inventory STORED MOMENTUM AND VELOCITY! - Youssef_Ferchichi1yrCommentedEnergy could only be transformed, neither created nor destroyed. Energy equaled mass times the speed of light squared.
- Youssef_Ferchichi1yrCommented
as long as you don't harm anyone needlessly
Even if I was marked a 'villain' by others, I would be fine as long as I did what my conscience said. - Youssef_Ferchichi1yrCommented
*cough* joker *cough*
One villain was a hero to another and vice versa. - Youssef_Ferchichi1yrReplied to Mad_Smile
this baby makes laugh everytime
"...Interesting." - Youssef_Ferchichi1yrCommented"Now, now. You shouldn't underestimate yourself. I don't know your circumstances, Miss Goddess, but whatever the case, a frown like that doesn't suit you."
- Youssef_Ferchichi1yrReplied to Troglodyte_08The person staring back at me was a young man with white hair and crimson eyes. His face was a bit androgynous, but in the way that would probably be really handsome if he filled out a bit more with some muscle. He was also around average height... I'd say 5'5" or so? Not too tall but not too short.
- Youssef_Ferchichi1yrReplied to Anjishnu_Nandi
a man of science I see
In terms of what 'I' knew... I knew a lot about general ways to get strong, study, science, etc... but I didn't know what would work here and what wouldn't. Testing would be needed. - Youssef_Ferchichi1yrReplied to Nunca_nem_vi
*pain*
Bell- No, 'I' didn't have anything on me except the clothes on my body, my bag, and about 200 valis... which equated to roughly two bucks USD in terms of comparison. - Youssef_Ferchichi1yrCommented
about that...
'Life is pretty good...' Peter thought as he crawled into bed next to MJ and fell asleep. - Youssef_Ferchichi1yrPosted
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- Youssef_Ferchichi1yrPosted
So far, this story has shown to be a great pastime for me, not a perfect story by any means, it's pacing is a bit too fast and the grammar and dialogue do lack a little, not to mention that the MCU part of the story is just a copy paste of the original movies with batman and the bat family added in to minimize collateral damage in their large scale fights and add some extra dialogue and more interactions with original characters which isn't all that bad to be honest, because I've seen worse, but the idea of this universe's batman is very great and the batman origins, the green goblin, the red room and Nightwing sagas were all great in their own ways, it helps with world building and introducing new characters to the fold. Overall a great story. I give it four stars.👍