Axion_Luxaria
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Axion_Luxaria7mthCommentedAuthor, you need to add commas in the appropriate places.
'Oh? This is unusual normally he would cower before fathers' gaze' Liam thought.- Axion_Luxaria7mthCommented
slass* ---> class
David did not expect that the reward he received was a skill, and it was in the Primordial Slass. - Axion_Luxaria7mthCommented
movement* ---> moment
Without a moment's hesitation, I leaped backward off the cliff's edge, plunging into the abyss below. The artifact remained secure within my mouth, beyond his reach. The movement I saw Roger's head, my survival had already become impossible. Everything I had done until now was to hinder his plans and make him suffer. - Axion_Luxaria7mthCommented
movement* ---> momentyou are repeatedly doing it in the synopsis too. Fix it, author.
The poison bomb that contained the potent poison from my master's collection had long permeated his lungs, he was already a dead man the movement he inhaled the poisonous gas. - Axion_Luxaria7mthCommented
where* ---> were
This was also why even though I could buy the combat art I needed in the city itself, Aiden and I opted to come here to verify just how accurate the contents of the novel where. Now we just needed to see if we could actually meet them and strike a deal with both of them before the story began. - Axion_Luxaria7mthCommented*** TO BE CONTINUED! THANK YOU FOR PLAYING MY GAME! ***
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superhero landing
I jumped down from the high spot where I was standing before I reached right behind those people. Looking at their status, they seemed to be adventurers. If my guess is not wrong, they were people who already knew Evelyn. - Axion_Luxaria7mthCommented
observing* ---> absorbing
-You can obtain some basic [Skills] from killing certain monsters and observing their cores - Axion_Luxaria7mthCommented
Amelia's ---> Mira's
Amelia submitted the quest under mine and Amelia's name. - Axion_Luxaria8mthCommented
Alex??
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The last line needs editing.
His mother and sister went to Fred Donovan, who had a seat in the League. Fred Donovan was one of the eleven SSS level eleven manhunters in the world who was a spear user. When Amy awakened her powers, Fred found out that she was a spear user like him and decided to make her his heir. This is why Amy's mother married Rosa to his son Jack Donovan. - Axion_Luxaria8mthCommented
quite* ---> quiet
Farnus remained quite, while Silvus was thinking on his evaluation of Asher Greville. - Axion_Luxaria8mthCommented
then* ---> than
Due to the way End Year Tournament worked, if you performed better against someone far above you, your chances of ranking up were higher, then the person who defeated the person one rank above him. - Axion_Luxaria8mthCommented
your best*
"Goodluck Carl, give it your and try to survive, it's your best chance to get the most marks," His friend cheered him on, but even Carl himself was nervous going against Asher. - Axion_Luxaria10mthCommented
brothers* ----> brother
Sitting on his knees, Raven recalled the last words he spoke to his brothers. The words were like a sword, stabbed deep within his heart. - Axion_Luxaria10mthReplied to OneArmedImmortal
yup exactly...
Even though he was angry. However, most of that anger was because he cared about his brother. No matter what the world of Hellfire was, he had to find his brother! - Axion_Luxaria10mthCommentedCh 260 Night Party
- Axion_Luxaria11mthCommented"We can defeat him," Elena said to Kevin.
- Axion_Luxaria11mthCommentedThree minutes later, Kevin was on the ground, as were Elena and Lishia.
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Its good to dream but it's bad to be delusional...
She believed that if Asher could do it, so could they.