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DaoistSLWwmk4mthReplied to Frozentech- DaoistSLWwmk4mthPosted
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.... Composture doesn't mean what you think it means... The word you are looking for is composure. Here some synomyms of composture : manure, compost, just like your novel.... I'm out this seems like a nice story but you need to go back to school and learn vocabulary right...
Ch 4 Taste of the medieval beer - DaoistSLWwmk4mthCommented
that's not immersive if you need to stop the flow for people to understand...
I will be using those scales for the better immersion, but for the sake of keeping things easy to understand, whenever I will use them in the chapter, they will be placed either in brackets right beside the story number or the entire scale will be copied to the author's notes!* - DaoistSLWwmk4mthCommentedCh 31 Drake
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What I don't get is they have the tech to host game across the galaxy but can't send drone mechs with pilots in a safe place on a random planet while the mech are fighting elsewhere... No pilot loss so can save those 3.5% to fight in an unlimited amount of mechs.
Ch 25 Wartorn Instance - DaoistSLWwmk4mthReplied to Cellphone
or save him sometime the only path to survival/victory is a bold and reckless charge but if you are too much of a coward to do it and the mech push you to do it... Might jkust save your life or at least complete the mission.
The invisible but potentially influental X-Factor was the single biggest draw of this mech. Ves devoted almost all of his time constructing his mech with a single purpose in mind. Though not a mech pilot himself, as its designer he felt the Marc Antony possessed a faint aura of aggression. His customers might not be aware his design could spark the X-Factor, but it remained a minor benefit even if they remained clueless about the X-Factor. - DaoistSLWwmk4mthCommented
same color scheme that max and nico chose in the strongest warrior mecha system or smt like that
He choose to dye the mech in black, and accompanied it with red and bronze accents. It contrasted nicely with the Caesar Augustus, and gave his own design an intimidating, bloodthirsty appearance. He dyed the shield in red as well, and added a couple of yellow stylized eagle wings and lightning bolts in homage to the historical Marc Antony's homeland. - DaoistSLWwmk5mthCommented
yeah they def gonna go overboard
Manami shivered in my embrace, "Is that Master's Divine Order?" - DaoistSLWwmk5mthReplied to crom4
more like CS:GO/2 meme
I patted her head with a free hand, "That's good, you're all making significant progress. There's no need to try and rush B." - DaoistSLWwmk5mthCommented
she needs more masternium
"IT'S JUST SO AMAZING!" - DaoistSLWwmk5mthPosted
nevermind my other comment mc is braindead his fcking crew makes him take risk of death without his consent then let it go like it was nothing fuck off vent that bitch down the airlock ! He should've killed Mirage a long time ago this is plain bad writing. You must be the dumbest fucking stupid simp to let someone like her alive when she slice in anyone close to you and kill them instantly how can you have someone like that, that keeps betraying you beside you plain stupid.
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It's awesome,!! But I can't stop myself from comparing Erich to Berengar and man Erich is soft as sponge... Bro get fucked in the ass none stop by his own people but still fight for them and all. Burn them all to ashes and be done with it ! At the very least kill that grand admiral or smt that man is a snake
- DaoistSLWwmk7mthCommentedCh 37 You're slaying this young lady's heart
- DaoistSLWwmk7mthCommentedCh 36 Then I want this nobody
- DaoistSLWwmk7mthCommentedCh 16 I hate you to the core
- DaoistSLWwmk7mthCommentedCh 10 Intense Bathing Session