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DaoistO7ve7i2mthPostedThis novel is pretty good. I like the things it has that most other stories fail to provide which is well thought out character development. But, the only issue I have is that the story is painfully slow. Plot development is good but after rigorous 250 chapters I could not continue as this amount of story would need 90-120 chapters at most. Nonetheless, writing quality is good as well as the interactions between the characters. Anyway, hope all the best for the author.
- DaoistO7ve7i2mthCommented
Splendid. Exactly! He should not be making amends for something he did not do like some beta Korean ass protagonist.
An apology might work out but my ego simply wouldn't allow me to grovel before her as if I were culpable for someone else's misdeeds. I can't even imagine myself stooping to the level of asking, "Hey, can I come to your birthday?" - DaoistO7ve7i2mthCommented
Considering his vision, it is indeed a suitable choice but I think he should also have at least a short sword or something to maintain a strong vibe.
Although my initial inclination was to work on my swordsmanship, a particular area caught my attention. Instead of struggling with a weapon I was clearly deficient in, maybe it made more sense to hone the skills I excelled at? - DaoistO7ve7i2mthCommented
Oh! I actually get it.
"[Magnetic Grasp]," I muttered, unveiling my new skill—a Tier C ability. My revolver responded, flying back into my hands. Leaping over, I positioned my hands below my legs before swinging them back in front of me, still bound. - DaoistO7ve7i6mthCommentedCh 28 Magic
- DaoistO7ve7i6mthCommentedCh 16 Tragedy
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A more natural development, I guess.
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