LuxLucian
of reading
6
Read books
Badges
8Moments
208
LuxLucian9mthCommentedThey shouldn't actually be famous at all yet. The four families should have been well known in the earth-specific fold or dimension, due to their rapid rise in Leonel's 20 year absence. Beyond this, they should have little to no renown, as of yet.
While the Brazinger family had gained a secret almost cult like following, appearing from nowhere and displaying such great strength, because Aina didn't share their patented look, it made it very easy to dismiss her…- LuxLucian10mthCommented
I'm more worried about Leonel! 😂
Over the horizon, Aina and the others just caught up in time to see Leonel vanishing before their eyes. - LuxLucian10mthCommented
as thin as...a whole cicada? that's not...that's not very thin at all... 🤦
Each blade was as thin as a cicada. They fluttered through the wind like a leaf, looking much more like the thin fins of a beautiful fish rather than the blades they were. With just a single jolt, they went from fragile and flexible to incredibly tough and sharp. - LuxLucian10mthCommented
it was his 🎱🎱
It was then that she realized the scariest thing about Leonel wasn't his lineage, nor was it his talent… - LuxLucian10mthCommented
except Mr author already said that literally no where else has ever even heard of dragons or has stories of them or myths or anything .it was uniquely earth.
They had only heard myths about such beasts, there should have been any real occurrences of them. - LuxLucian10mthCommented
😮💨 Except he's already said he could find no record of dragons or even the term outside of earth...
Earth Dragon, while was the official name of this species, wasn't to be taken literally. Most accurately, they were a type of earth affinity centipede with the legendary ferociousness of dragons, and they were notoriously difficult to handle. - LuxLucian10mthCommented
keeps mixing Ancestor Hugo of the Morales (who is running this whole heir ears zone), with elder/ancestor Mito of the Bow Alliance...
Leonel could immediately tell that their target weren't humans, however he didn't seem capable of pinpointing the exact race either, something that made him narrow his eyes. It seemed that Ancestor Hito had gone out of his way to pick more obscure targets just for the sake of maintaining the usual randomness associated with Zones. - LuxLucian10mthCommented
let's set the record straight, he is not emotionally intelligent, he is logical and manipulative. He knows how people work and what makes them tick. But in the same breath, he doesn't have a clue why he's on love with Aina and struggles to even call it love, he "cares for" his "loved ones" on a tiered basis (Dad>Mom & 'brothers'>Grandma>some other somewhat important or useful people>people who piqued his interest>everyone else), and this forced narrative that he's emotionally intelligent needs to just stop. Just tell us he's smart.
The funniest part was that Leonel knew it. Despite his personality, he was hyper aware of everything and very emotionally intelligent, he couldn't be a leader without such skills. He had just chosen to ignore it anyway, much to the frustration of a lot of people. - LuxLucian10mthCommented
BRUH!...me too, I'd run and wish you luck.
Aphestus patted a hand on his shoulder. "Good luck," he said before rushing away. - LuxLucian10mthCommented
hm, or maybe Ainas's mom was related to her somehow, or like Leonel she had made some sort of copy of herself that was out there in the world? 🤔 Curious but intriguing.
"Not bad," she said lightly. "Much better than those other two." - LuxLucian10mthCommented
yeah, he had nothing to do with it, to be honest .
But that was fine, he had destroyed them once, and he would do it again. - LuxLucian10mthCommented
do you think Leonel himself was the person they feared in the future zone? or do you think it was way too far past his lifetime? or maybe an alternate and mythological zone? I'm still thinking it's a variant zone. The demons could even be of Camelot, and they are still fighting against the influence of the four families or something?
That would be the true Emperor's Might, that was what the four Great Families feared the most. - LuxLucian10mthCommented
so is he on their ship? important details left out. Otherwise how is he shooting through a, "mostly seventh dimensional ship" (materials), as it was literally just described in one of the last two chapters.
The commotion of the blast caused a large number of soldiers to rush to the bow of the ship to see what was happening, but most died even as they made their way to the location, not even making it to the hallway to see the face of the man that was killing them. - LuxLucian10mthCommented
isn't he walking through...space? It was emphasized how dangerous it was previously ...and yet people keep doing it and it just keeps being called air or stuff like that. I'm confused
Richard's expression changed as he took a step back, the two individuals who had followed him out stepping forward with menacing auras. Without fail, both of them were in the Seventh Dimension. However, Leonel continued to walk through the air as though he hadn't noticed at all, a billowing violet fog wafting from his body. - LuxLucian10mthCommented
literally a planet full of them. it's not that interesting.
At that moment, she seemed to forget that she too was a Morales. Not just one that had married into the family, but one who had been born a Morales and married a Morales. - LuxLucian10mthCommented
why though? she's just sort of an oddball, never really fleshed out for us. She's not awful or anything?(this is Aina's adoptive sister, for the record)
Second Place – Yuri Brazinger – 81.87 - LuxLucian10mthCommented
did he somehow accidentally activate his trial...or something?
Soon, he realized that the problem extended further than just his spears as well, even his Spear Force seemed more tame and languid as though it was struggling against falling into a deep sleep. This astonished Leonel all the more. - LuxLucian10mthCommented
are they going to have alternating speed and strength lineage factors? that'd help him press on!
The second had wings that seemed capable of enveloping an entire planet. When it rose its head and roared into the skies, stars exploded and worlds were destroyed. Its body radiated a dark silver that sometimes shone as bright as a sun but what often as black as an endless light. - LuxLucian10mthCommented
...and maintaining the fog and domain and internal sight and...
Her skin was completely flushed red, her rippling breasts bouncing ever so slightly with her every breath. The two seemed to have completely forgotten that they were in the demon world, their minds focused entirely on nothing other than their own lust.