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Hannibal_Apple1yrCommentedPlease don’t do the annoying ‘funny’ system.
[Sorry my bad]- Hannibal_Apple1yrCommented"Hahahahah!!" A manic laughter reverberated all over the gloomy cave, but soon he collapsed to the ground, clutching his ribs while coughing out blood.
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Taken inspiration from ATG?
[When an individual's 64 profound doors are opened, The profound veins possessed by that individual become Heavenly Profound Veins] - Hannibal_Apple1yrCommented
Then how does he know what a robot is?
Even though he came from an era that was not yet Modern, regarding Games, he had played them when going to a gambling establishment in his town. Even that is a classic game that is used for gambling. - Hannibal_Apple1yrReplied to Lara_Rose43
Sigh… Again? Same cliche where ever i go.
"Ehmm, uhm, who are you?" Lin Xian asked, which made the Woman freeze instantly. - Hannibal_Apple1yrPosted
When you have to constantly push yourself to read the chapter where MC is being bossed around like puppy can make anyone become frustrated. Either your are deleting all bad comments are somehow people really like this novel(which is not possible from power stones). And are you acting oblivious or are you making the characters worse than a piece of cardboard? 1/5 rating to be honest.
- Hannibal_Apple1yrCommented
When you have to constantly push yourself to read the chapter where MC is being bossed around like puppy can make anyone become frustrated. Either your are deleting all bad comments are somehow people really like this novel(which is not possible from power stones). And are you acting oblivious or are you making the characters worse than a piece of cardboard? 1/5 rating to be honest.
Ch 7 Make a Girl Fall in Love - Hannibal_Apple1yrCommented
So no one can hear the gun firing sound?
As long as I was completely focused on shooting, my mind couldn't dwell on the horrible thing I was about to do. So I let myself drown in the sense of accomplishment that archery provided, losing track of time. - Hannibal_Apple1yrCommented
The MC is already making me roll my eyes…
Everything? What does he mean? Does he mean his desire to see me kill will be explained or what? Damn it! What the hell did he want? Was he some sort of murder god? Wait! Come to think of it, that actually makes sense. Where else would he get so many souls if he wasn't a murder god? I released a sigh and rubbed my temples. This thinking about gods and whatnot is making my head hurt. Enough of this. - Hannibal_Apple1yrCommented
This is where I must leave. Lily is a freaking 15 year old, and what you did is basically grooming, and almost ra*e using your pheromones when lily was still a child. Oh god, I hope your get your mind checked even writing this garbage.
This book has been deleted. - Hannibal_Apple1yrReplied to SiNgLeSiNcEbIrTh33
Thought so too. But the author is inconsistent and always changing. It frustrates me tbh
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Sigh… so boring
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I see zero originality or creativity in this novel. This is as cliche as it could get. Though I don’t mind cliches, it’s done in worst way in this novel.
This book has been deleted. - Hannibal_Apple1yrReplied to Novel_Guru
Uncle Roger into harem novels? Fuiyoh!!
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Really, that fast?
Chapter 10— Star Hotel, Deflowering Chen Mu [R-18] - Hannibal_Apple1yrReplied to Me_DaVillain
In no situation there would be a valid reason for this… but I am curious what reason you will give for this women who was willing to get inside a stranger’s car.
From the moment, Chen Mu, herself laid her eyes on him, and now that Ye Feng without a doubt was rich, she willingly gives herself to him! - Hannibal_Apple1yrCommented
Damn she is cheap af
She said seductively, as she eyed him.