the flow is good for me . keep going 💪.

thanks man 👍

I have been reading video games novel for some time and this story gives a unique taste to the genre.The time Traveller and the MC gives a unique storyline and the character development is good as well.Always keep me interested to see what will be next.So those who like video game genre should give this a try . Good work Author.Keep going [img=recommend]

MC is intelligence and interesting .

Language barrier is awful in fantasy world also 🙂

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Great story to read.Made me attracted to read more of this plot. Thank you for your good work. Keep going 💪.

well everyone need to pay debt quick huh..🙂🙌