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CarltheCreator

CarltheCreator

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2022-11-28 JoinedNigeria
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  • CarltheCreator
    CarltheCreator4mth
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    Dad's will

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    The Night Lawyer
    Urban · RA_PHA_EL
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  • CarltheCreator
    CarltheCreator4mth
    Commented

    swore

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    The Night Lawyer
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  • CarltheCreator
    CarltheCreator4mth
    Commented

    The m in Mr should be capitalized.

    The news reporter started to describe him, stating different body features as the final nail in the coffin was her saying to the camera "The man has further identified to be Mr Damien Barrow".
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    The Night Lawyer
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  • CarltheCreator
    CarltheCreator4mth
    Commented

    Change Apprehension to apprehension.

    Fear, confusion, anger, denial all slammed into Damien's chest like a sledgehammer. He got up and flung open his door to see a police car stopping outside his house as two officers stepped down. Noticing him their eyes were saddled with apprehension and sorrow as they could only stare at him in silence.
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    The Night Lawyer
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  • CarltheCreator
    CarltheCreator4mth
    Commented

    as he

    At the last moment when he was right in the world middle of the road, he noticed an oncoming car moving way too fast for him to leap away. His last thoughts were him not being able to have a battle of wits in the courtroom with his son or be there as he became a man. He muttered "Goodbye son" as his final words.
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    The Night Lawyer
    Urban · RA_PHA_EL
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  • CarltheCreator
    CarltheCreator4mth
    Commented

    Where did you even hear of "koenigsegg".I didn't even know that brand existed.

    His dad constantly nagged him for it telling him he had the potential to reach for the stars but would settle for stairs. He was like a "Koenigsegg" that settled at a scooter's speed.
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    The Night Lawyer
    Urban · RA_PHA_EL
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  • CarltheCreator
    CarltheCreator4mth
    Replied to Inspiron_123

    Check out my new book; Primordial's Champions. If you like this book then I'm sure you'll like it.

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    Freedom Path: The World of Deva
    Fantasy · CarltheCreator
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  • CarltheCreator
    CarltheCreator4mth
    Replied to Philia_Hilz

    I personally think there's a huge improvement in my new book; Primordial's Champions, check it out.

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    Freedom Path: The World of Deva
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  • CarltheCreator
    CarltheCreator4mth
    Replied to Salem_Baazeem

    If you like this then check out my new book; Primordial's Champions. I'm sure you'll love it.

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    Freedom Path: The World of Deva
    Fantasy · CarltheCreator
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  • CarltheCreator
    CarltheCreator4mth
    Replied to G0d_4174

    Please check out my new book Primordial's Champions.

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    Freedom Path: The World of Deva
    Fantasy · CarltheCreator
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  • CarltheCreator
    CarltheCreator4mth
    Replied to TheBaldWizard

    Check out my new book Primordial's Champions. Will be waiting to see your comment.

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    Freedom Path: The World of Deva
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  • CarltheCreator
    CarltheCreator4mth
    Replied to Voidz_Zero

    By the way, did you eventually read my new book?

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    Freedom Path: The World of Deva
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  • CarltheCreator
    CarltheCreator4mth
    Replied to dylan_pyle

    Sadly, those concepts don't bind this mc.

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    Primordial's Champions
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  • CarltheCreator
    CarltheCreator4mth
    Replied to dylan_pyle

    What do you mean?

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    Primordial's Champions
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  • CarltheCreator
    CarltheCreator5mth
    Replied to Romance_guy

    In a good or bad way?

    Ch 48 CHAPTER 47: Instructor Romguy
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    Primordial's Champions
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  • CarltheCreator
    CarltheCreator5mth
    Replied to Romance_guy

    Like I said, it's different from other webnovels.

    Ch 48 CHAPTER 47: Instructor Romguy
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    Primordial's Champions
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  • CarltheCreator
    CarltheCreator5mth
    Replied to Romance_guy

    What you think of the chapter?

    Ch 46 CHAPTER 46: Sinking
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    Primordial's Champions
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  • CarltheCreator
    CarltheCreator5mth
    Replied to Romance_guy

    By the way, are you a member of my discord channel?

    Ch 44 CHAPTER 44: Getting Off My Ass
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    Primordial's Champions
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  • CarltheCreator
    CarltheCreator5mth
    Replied to Romance_guy

    Do you think I should change the synopsis?

    Ch 42 CHAPTER 42: The Mystical Forest
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    Primordial's Champions
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  • CarltheCreator
    CarltheCreator5mth
    Replied to Romance_guy

    What do you like about it?

    Ch 41 CHAPTER 41: Fragmented Mind
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    Primordial's Champions
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