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Reva_Lina_3753

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  • Reva_Lina_3753
    Reva_Lina_37534mth
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    Elestria's story is just like me when my friends have their matches but me. I thought I should move to another region to find one 😭😭 but my mom said better to wait for him to find me

    Lusi added, "Actually, she just wants to work to make money so she can move to another region."
    By the Moon River
    Fantasy · eveawonyu
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  • Reva_Lina_3753
    Reva_Lina_37534mth
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    ohh 😮

    To Lusi, that voice sounded different. Elestria was a tough girl, but this time she asked gently. She revealed, "We were awkward at first, but we got along. We held hands, hugged, kissed, and fucked."
    By the Moon River
    Fantasy · eveawonyu
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  • Reva_Lina_3753
    Reva_Lina_37534mth
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    🤔

    "He'll carry you everywhere!" Scarlett laughed loudly. She didn't know she would choke then.
    By the Moon River
    Fantasy · eveawonyu
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  • Reva_Lina_3753
    Reva_Lina_37534mth
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    simple

    Lusi chuckled. "Introduce ourselves, live in the same house, and be happy. Just like us."
    By the Moon River
    Fantasy · eveawonyu
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  • Reva_Lina_3753
    Reva_Lina_37534mth
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    "You could say that."
    By the Moon River
    Fantasy · eveawonyu
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  • Reva_Lina_3753
    Reva_Lina_37534mth
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    A round, white full moon hung in the sky since sunset. A sprinkling of stars surrounded it and illuminated the earth of the Emberfall Kingdom.
    By the Moon River
    Fantasy · eveawonyu
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  • Reva_Lina_3753
    Reva_Lina_37531yr
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    I've finished reading and wanted to leave a review. Dear author, I love the way you wrote the characters, Avery and Grace's relationship, and Kenneth. I like Kenneth, but don't dare wish he was with Avery. 🚩🚩🚩

    My Ex's Uncle
    Urban · eveawonyu
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  • Reva_Lina_3753
    Reva_Lina_37531yr
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    Author, I like your creator's though. I feel it will be nice if we can have characters' dialogue like behind the scene

    Ch 36 Why are you possessive?
    My Ex's Uncle
    Urban · eveawonyu
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  • Reva_Lina_3753
    Reva_Lina_37531yr
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    "We'll meet at Grace's wedding. Go back to your habitat now."
    My Ex's Uncle
    Urban · eveawonyu
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  • Reva_Lina_3753
    Reva_Lina_37531yr
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    whuttt

    Maximillian smiled amusedly. "How could you dump me? I invited you to drink green wine together."
    My Ex's Uncle
    Urban · eveawonyu
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  • Reva_Lina_3753
    Reva_Lina_37531yr
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    [img=Sigh][img=Sigh]

    When I'm walking on the sidewalk, seeing little children walking with their parents makes me jealous. I was jealous because I couldn't feel the same way.
    My Ex's Uncle
    Urban · eveawonyu
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  • Reva_Lina_3753
    Reva_Lina_37531yr
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    Graziano???

    Ch 35 Graciano or Graziano?
    My Ex's Uncle
    Urban · eveawonyu
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  • Reva_Lina_3753
    Reva_Lina_37531yr
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    "Also, you must obey my words."
    My Ex's Uncle
    Urban · eveawonyu
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  • Reva_Lina_3753
    Reva_Lina_37531yr
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    where's the next chapter?

    Ch 6 Shackles
    Prostitutes' Escape
    History · Sneakycat098
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  • Reva_Lina_3753
    Reva_Lina_37531yr
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    like a point, after writing a comma, put a space before writing the clause

    "It's..it's not you."She managed to say past her aching throat,more tears came.
    HER WELL KEPT SECRET
    Urban · SERENE
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  • Reva_Lina_3753
    Reva_Lina_37531yr
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    it's good after the point is given a space before the new sentence.

    "Will you marry me Blondie..?" Piper looked at the only man she'll ever love, tears gathered in her blue eyes and streamed down her face.She would've loved to be his wife more than anything in this world especially knowing what she does now.She had woken up early this morning to take a pregnancy test and it had come back positive.She's pregnant.With Sergio's baby they've been dating for seven months and it has been the best seven months of her entire life, she'd give anything to build a life with him.
    HER WELL KEPT SECRET
    Urban · SERENE
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  • Reva_Lina_3753
    Reva_Lina_37531yr
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    me too 🥺

    I wished I could go back in time and be a kid again.
    My Ex's Uncle
    Urban · eveawonyu
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  • Reva_Lina_3753
    Reva_Lina_37531yr
    Posted

    this is an isekai type of story, but in indonesia. I like Indonesia, very good

    Stay Away from Me, Villain!
    History · eveawonyu
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  • Reva_Lina_3753
    Reva_Lina_37531yr
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    I like the neat writing of this story. The choice of words is also good. Authors, be diligent in updating stories!😇😇

    Heaven I Made for You
    Fantasy · eveawonyu
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  • Reva_Lina_3753
    Reva_Lina_37531yr
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    author, I have read your story. I like your writing and the neatness of your writing.

    Ch 10 Shuxin : I want to see her red eyes
    Heaven I Made for You
    Fantasy · eveawonyu
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