I think you should subtly like by mentioning 'the threat' and all, this will also create a sense of anticipation as what might be the threat, what is going to happen in the future to come. this will make it look more imfactfull but in a nut shell loved this chapter much love❤️ will wait for the next chapter.

when is the next chap coming sir??

keep on writing like this ❤️ much love ❤️❤️

The story does titilate my unstaiated desire of seeing a HOTD fanfic which is distinct from game of thrones and leaves you wanting for more as each chapter goes on 2 chapters in it feels all too grounded as it should be.