DaoistWenMing
A passionate rookie author and a devotee of reading.
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Currently in the process of slowly revising the earlier chapters so these spelling mistakes and lack of personality in characters would eventually change. There shouldn't be much of these problems in newer chapters though.
Yes
Borrow is a term I like better, not that anyone else would be using it anyways.
It’s just a book on how to swing a sword properly, I guess I didn’t really make that clear enough.
In the knowledge he obtained. He was pretty much given most of the secrets of the Mortal realm, though it is up to him to actually comprehend and use it.
Kids do be gullible like that, thank god there was no white van.
Secret, no one’s finding out anytime soon.
Thanks for the feedback. I believe that I do improve in the points you've brought up in much later chapters, though if there are any mistakes or areas that need work, do tell me. As for these earlier chapters, I might revise them a bit to improve the interactions between characters.
Thanks for the feedback! I do realize that I made too many realms, of course that was way after I started writing, and so I didn't feel like changing anything. Of course, I do have plans for the old man, so no need to worry about that. As for the amount of chapters, I did the math and do not plan to write more than 4,000 chapters to finish this, which I believe should be enough. If you want a better and more balanced power system (In my opinion) go check out my other book, Ascending Mortal Cultivator. While it may be paused right now, I don't plan on dropping it and will probably start on it again next year. Anyways, thanks for the review, I haven't gotten one in a long time lol.
I agree
Well if I were to compare the cultivation realms to real life, I'd say a single person at the Radiant Realm [Earth Realm] can easily take over the entirety of earth. Someone at the Ascension Realm [Profound Realm] can easily traverse between solar systems and destroy ours. An Ascendant Immortal [Immortal Realm] can destroy the entire Milky Way Galaxy, and so on. If one were to reach the Infinite Realm, I'd say they can destroy our universe thousands of times and recreate it thousands of times without breaking a sweat. Do note that as one ascends, the realms (physical realm, not a person's cultivation level) also get stronger, so no one can just waltz around destroying worlds like nothing.
Shameless author here giving myself 5 stars (Lets be honest, who would give themselves less than 5 stars unless idk) Anyways, here's my analysis of my very first novel; Grammar, punctuation, and use of clever language I would say is my forte. (Please do point out any mistakes if you see then though) I would say the first 60 chapters or so could have been better and used a bit more polishing. However this is my first novel (Please don't kill me) Also, I'm dumb, so leave more reviews cuz I read all of them. (I do wish to improve my writing skills)
Tropes exist to be used ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ I'll try not to abuse them.
Because I was copy and pasting lol. Thanks for pointing that out!