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DaoistWenMing

DaoistWenMing

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A passionate rookie author and a devotee of reading.

2022-11-24 JoinedGlobal
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  • DaoistWenMing
    DaoistWenMing8d
    Replied to Blind_Idiot

    I have discord, but I don’t have a server for my novel. Might work on that later on though.

    Ch -1 Info of things
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  • DaoistWenMing
    DaoistWenMing1mth
    Replied to Anup_RyuSenju

    They are targets of sacrifice.

    Sheng Tian's pupils turned into slits "All women step back! Men! Form a phalanx around the women and the teleportation circle!"
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  • DaoistWenMing
    DaoistWenMing1mth
    Replied to ForbiddenTruth

    Currently in the process of slowly revising the earlier chapters so these spelling mistakes and lack of personality in characters would eventually change. There shouldn't be much of these problems in newer chapters though.

    "So" Sheng Tian began "what tier divergent and I?"
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  • DaoistWenMing
    DaoistWenMing1mth
    Replied to DaoistUbwoll

    I don't plan on dropping anything. Also my other novel is just paused for now. Anyways, thanks for the review!

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  • DaoistWenMing
    DaoistWenMing1mth
    Replied to ForbiddenTruth

    Yes

    Maintaining this flame took a toll on Sheng Tian, and sweat beaded his face. It had taken him nearly an hour to manifest this Tri Colored Flame.
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  • DaoistWenMing
    DaoistWenMing1mth
    Replied to ForbiddenTruth

    Borrow is a term I like better, not that anyone else would be using it anyways.

    Sheng Tian then took out a cauldron half as tall as he was. It was made of iron, and slightly rusty, making Sheng Tian sigh.
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  • DaoistWenMing
    DaoistWenMing1mth
    Replied to ForbiddenTruth

    It’s just a book on how to swing a sword properly, I guess I didn’t really make that clear enough.

    The boy didn't really need the book, as the knowledge he had gained from the old man included such simple things along with a lot more. Even so, he took it as not accepting it would most definitely be suspicious. 
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  • DaoistWenMing
    DaoistWenMing1mth
    Replied to ForbiddenTruth

    In the knowledge he obtained. He was pretty much given most of the secrets of the Mortal realm, though it is up to him to actually comprehend and use it.

    Sheng Tian touched his chin with a finger, "I can make some low ranked inscriptions!"
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  • DaoistWenMing
    DaoistWenMing1mth
    Replied to ForbiddenTruth

    Kids do be gullible like that, thank god there was no white van.

    Sheng Tian grunted as he slammed into a tree. Extracting himself, he found an imprint of him in the wood.
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  • DaoistWenMing
    DaoistWenMing1mth
    Replied to ForbiddenTruth

    Secret, no one’s finding out anytime soon.

    Suddenly, his eyes widened as he recalled an incident just one million years ago. An incident that shook the 13 Heavens to its core, "It can't be. . ."
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  • DaoistWenMing
    DaoistWenMing2mth
    Replied to DaoistWenMing

    Operation Revision is underway! I will slowly but surely go back to my earlier chapters and revise them, using the experience I gained to patch up the holes. Any chapter that I have revised will be stated at the bottom in author's thoughts.

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  • DaoistWenMing
    DaoistWenMing3mth
    Replied to animanic_0827

    Thanks for the feedback. I believe that I do improve in the points you've brought up in much later chapters, though if there are any mistakes or areas that need work, do tell me. As for these earlier chapters, I might revise them a bit to improve the interactions between characters.

    Ch 5 Alchemy Techniques
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  • DaoistWenMing
    DaoistWenMing3mth
    Replied to EvilCultivator

    Thanks for the feedback! I do realize that I made too many realms, of course that was way after I started writing, and so I didn't feel like changing anything. Of course, I do have plans for the old man, so no need to worry about that. As for the amount of chapters, I did the math and do not plan to write more than 4,000 chapters to finish this, which I believe should be enough. If you want a better and more balanced power system (In my opinion) go check out my other book, Ascending Mortal Cultivator. While it may be paused right now, I don't plan on dropping it and will probably start on it again next year. Anyways, thanks for the review, I haven't gotten one in a long time lol.

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  • DaoistWenMing
    DaoistWenMing4mth
    Replied to Maestro_14

    I agree

    Infinite Realm (No Limit)
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  • DaoistWenMing
    DaoistWenMing4mth
    Replied to Murdda223

    Well if I were to compare the cultivation realms to real life, I'd say a single person at the Radiant Realm [Earth Realm] can easily take over the entirety of earth. Someone at the Ascension Realm [Profound Realm] can easily traverse between solar systems and destroy ours. An Ascendant Immortal [Immortal Realm] can destroy the entire Milky Way Galaxy, and so on. If one were to reach the Infinite Realm, I'd say they can destroy our universe thousands of times and recreate it thousands of times without breaking a sweat. Do note that as one ascends, the realms (physical realm, not a person's cultivation level) also get stronger, so no one can just waltz around destroying worlds like nothing.

    Ch -1 Info of things
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  • DaoistWenMing
    DaoistWenMing4mth
    Replied to Murdda223

    I don't think I quite understand what you mean. Perhaps you can reword your question a bit?

    Ch -1 Info of things
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  • DaoistWenMing
    DaoistWenMing5mth
    Posted

    Shameless author here giving myself 5 stars (Lets be honest, who would give themselves less than 5 stars unless idk) Anyways, here's my analysis of my very first novel; Grammar, punctuation, and use of clever language I would say is my forte. (Please do point out any mistakes if you see then though) I would say the first 60 chapters or so could have been better and used a bit more polishing. However this is my first novel (Please don't kill me) Also, I'm dumb, so leave more reviews cuz I read all of them. (I do wish to improve my writing skills)

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  • DaoistWenMing
    DaoistWenMing5mth
    Replied to AbandonedToGodhood

    Tropes exist to be used ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ I'll try not to abuse them.

    Wu Di then understood, Sheng Tian may act ruthless to his enemies and a bit cold to allies but in reality he just wanted to see his parents. He didn't want hindrances to delay him and wanted to prove himself once he met them.
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  • DaoistWenMing
    DaoistWenMing5mth
    Replied to Mudd

    Because I was copy and pasting lol. Thanks for pointing that out!

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  • DaoistWenMing
    DaoistWenMing5mth
    Replied to Divine_reaper

    Dunno, never crossed my mind. Either way, the sect would definitely question where he got these pills or who gave him the recipes. Selling it outside the sect is more time consuming, but gets rid of a lot of headache inducing things.

    Ch 17 Miracle Pills
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