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Kalel

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  • Kalel
    Kalel1yr
    Posted

    brothers, I'm just going to say that the mc is a shit until +/- ch470, where he has a power up, before that he is just a normal human being who uses human weapons and his head to win and like any other mc, he he's also stupid. my opinion? do not read, as i said, the mc is one of the weakest people in the work until +/- ch470, if you have the patience to read a work where the mc is dumb and weak, this one is for you.

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    Divinity: Against the Godly System
    Games · Demonic_angel
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  • Kalel
    Kalel1yr
    Posted

    MC RAPES WOMEN MC RAPES WOMEN MC RAPES WOMEN this story is rubbish, the mc really does rape women, if you want me to explain it in detail just ask, i really am very angry, i wasted more than 10 hours reading this rubbish for there in ch 200 he decided to start raping women, no read this shit

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    Reincarnated As The Strongest Ancestor With a System
    Eastern · Dark_Crow1111
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  • Kalel
    Kalel1yr
    Commented

    the story is being very good but this system of getting stronger is one of the worst I've ever seen, in addition to having no difference between one person and another, it takes a long time, that's why the system of cultivation techniques and levels are perfect, whatever something else is pretty bad compared to these 2

    Ch 32 Found A Way To A Dragon Girl’s Heart
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    RE: My Dragon Girlfriend In The Dragonic Apocalypse
    Fantasy · invayne
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  • Kalel
    Kalel1yr
    Posted

    I dropped this story. emotions are VERY misunderstood, this is not a story focused on emotions like re:zero's, but it is still below average in that regard. Example 1: the mc talks to a god as if it were some random person, and he doesn't seem shocked or afraid to be in a totally strange place with a person claiming to be a god, and the god himself doesn't act like a god, the god talks and acts like a random person. Example 2: the mc's mother was giving birth, but she spoke normally to the people around her, it didn't look like she was dying of pain at all, and these things that involve emotions happen all the time in the work

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    Reincarnated at Level Two Million
    Action · Alphachoas
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  • Kalel
    Kalel1yr
    Posted

    1 star for the story of the book, and mostly because most people give 5 stars just because of the author and not because of the book. but talking about this book, it's bad, first you don't know how the mc gets stronger, he has the magic, but how do you make the magic stronger? it is not shown, and secondly that the author does not give the slightest bit of information about anything in the novel, if you don't have the entire percy jackson book recorded, you will not understand, any building or culture that is explained in the original book, no and explained in this novel, and again, how does the mc get stronger in this karalho? i hate book where mc gets strong but not shown how

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    Percy Jackson: The God of Magic
    Book&Literature · CORNBRINGER
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  • Kalel
    Kalel1yr
    Commented

    well, it looks like this story is going to be one of those where the mc's golden finger will only show itself when it's convenient, in the first two simulations very good things came, and for 2 YEARS (104 weeks = 104 simulations) nothing worthy of the enough for mc to show? my finger is already at 1 star, because if you're going to bring a bad story here to the webnovel, it's better to leave it where it is

    Ch 9 Chapter 9: Admission
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    BTTH Life Simulator System
    Anime & Comics · Kisshot
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  • Kalel
    Kalel1yr
    Posted

    the last chapter released (ch 1202) made my patience run out, xietian is ruining this novel, for some reason he is finding it good to put drama and mystery in absolutely everything, in the last 100 chapters released (1100+) EVERY TIME there is information that the mc knows, but doesn't say, then he extends this information for 20 to 30 chapters to reveal it at a completely random moment, and this is shit, rubbish, xietian was doing a wonderful job to later spoil it, do this 1 or 2 times with super important information, I would understand and even like it when they do that, but do it with absolutely everything? this is just making this novel garbage to read, I will only change the 1 star when he improves this shit, because if it continues like this I will not change it because this novel will really deserve 1 star for how shit it is getting

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    Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · XIETIAN
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  • Kalel
    Kalel1yr
    Replied to Hanimated

    true, it would be really bad if it were like one piece, where it has the climax of the fight and it simply cuts to a scene of secondary characters talking, which the author of blood warlock does is almost perfect

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    Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · XIETIAN
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  • Kalel
    Kalel1yr
    Posted

    I was trying to write a review for about 20 minutes, and I couldn't come up with one, the only thing I'm going to say is that if this work had the system genre, it would have been much better

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    MARVEL: RE-DO
    Movies · Draul_TheOminous
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  • Kalel
    Kalel1yr
    Commented

    Perfect.

    Ch 24 CHAPTER 23
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    MARVEL: RE-DO
    Movies · Draul_TheOminous
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  • Kalel
    Kalel1yr
    Commented

    author, this is illegible, you can't read something like that, you're putting a lot of things that don't make sense, from what I understood before this chapter, the mc has the power to adapt, evolve and program the brain and that's super cool, but now he's controlling waves within the subconscious space to increase mental defense by reprogramming every part of the brain??? author, sorry to say this but you are complicating this series for no reason, if you were going to do something that complex like that, put a system, because that way it would at least summarize the mc's skills to have a base of understanding, because it's no use for me to read one soap opera where I don't even understand the powers of the mc, and if this keeps happening I won't be able to read

    Ch 12 CHAPTER 11
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    MARVEL: RE-DO
    Movies · Draul_TheOminous
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  • Kalel
    Kalel1yr
    Replied to Zucchi

    it only evolves when it passes a little of its limit, if it passes too much it dies

    Ch 9 CHAPTER 08
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    MARVEL: RE-DO
    Movies · Draul_TheOminous
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  • Kalel
    Kalel1yr
    Commented

    author, you can rest assured that in my opinion you made the best choice, of all the options you considered, the best thing was for him to learn by himself, but even then it would be bad because he would not have the personality evolution that being captured by the hydra will bring, Now that you've seen firsthand how the weak are treated, you certainly don't want to be weak anymore.

    Ch 8 CHAPTER 07
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    MARVEL: RE-DO
    Movies · Draul_TheOminous
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  • Kalel
    Kalel1yr
    Commented

    Jane Foster is perfect, for me she deserves a better story than what was presented in the MCU, Thor is literally a god, and he couldn't cure a human disease, here in real life I already had problems with very close relatives who suffer from cancer, so I know what it's like to live with someone who's been there, so I think Jane is perfect.

    Ch -1 Q&A
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    MARVEL: RE-DO
    Movies · Draul_TheOminous
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  • Kalel
    Kalel1yr
    Commented

    Perfect

    Ch 5 CHAPTER 04
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    MARVEL: RE-DO
    Movies · Draul_TheOminous
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  • Kalel
    Kalel1yr
    Commented

    guys, you have to remember that so far mc has not shown anything special, nothing, there are trillions or quadrillions of living beings in the marvel universe, and why would mc think he could become the strongest without having anything special? he himself said that he didn't feel anything different, that he's still human without any power, even if he used the knowledge he has, it wouldn't help anything, and he also has to remember that mc just got out of an existential crisis, he's satisfied with just living a normal life, even if it means dying afterwards

    Ch 3 CHAPTER 02
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    MARVEL: RE-DO
    Movies · Draul_TheOminous
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  • Kalel
    Kalel1yr
    Commented

    I've read A LOT of reincarnation novels, and I have to say yours had the best intro, definitely top of my list, but not perfect either, after he turned the knob it started to get worse, there was a lot information, there were some parts that could be simplified, and I must also say that I am a little apprehensive about the future of this soap opera, since you have built a character that is very difficult to evolve being your 1st job, for me it seems that the mc's mind it would break seeing a little blood, the mc is literally on the edge of the precipice in terms of mentality, and even authors who have already written several books make mistakes in the part of evolving the mc's mentality, tamara can do it, but I'm not expecting much

    Ch 2 CHAPTER 01
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    MARVEL: RE-DO
    Movies · Draul_TheOminous
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  • Kalel
    Kalel1yr
    Posted

    And I read up to ch200 and this is my review: For me a fafic revolves around 2 things, 1: the involvement of the OC-MC with the original MCs of the work and 2: the OC-MC developing the powers of the universe in which was placed. and now guess what? none of these 2 rules that in my opinion should be followed by all fanfics were fulfilled, the OC-MC was placed in 1945, and until now (ch200) there was no time skip, that's why the involvement of the OC-MC with characters like man of iron, spider man, doctor strange doesn't exist, and that takes away one of the main things of a fanfic for me, of course, it has involvement with captain america, x-man, eternals and some other OC enemies that the author put (in my opinion these OCs that the author put on spoiled the work even more because they messed with the canon of the story), and for me, apart from captain america, the x-man and eternal arcs are horrible, one of the worst marvel arcs, so read this story it was very distressing for me, and in the number 2 that I put up there, it refers to the power of the mc, the only thing that matters for the mc is to get more Superman Cards to gain more strength, if you take that power away from him, he would be nothing, so things like magic, weapons and knowledge were not rams were used in this work, and for a world as big as marvel's, this was very disappointing.

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    Marvel's Superman [Completed]
    Anime & Comics · BingeFics
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  • Kalel
    Kalel1yr
    Commented

    look, I'm not really optimistic for the future of this work, I'll try to read up to ch130 +/- and I'll give my evaluation, because so far it's not very good, first of all, the power of the mc isn't even his, he doesn't care about getting stronger, and yes he only cares about getting more superman cards, so apart from superman's powers, he's nothing, and that's very disappointing, because there are several ways he can get stronger in this world. And secondly, the timeline of the story itself is horrible, there are 70 YEARS left before the story really starts, and until then there are only X-Man and Eternals, which in my opinion are the worst marvel franchises, if not have a time skip to skip a good part of this time, this story will be horrible, because the cool thing about a fanfic is the interaction between the OC-MC and the original mc and the powers you can get in this world, and when you take those stuff, the story gets horrible

    Ch 66 Chapter 064 | Hydra's Zombified Super Soldiers!
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    Marvel's Superman [Completed]
    Anime & Comics · BingeFics
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  • Kalel
    Kalel1yr
    Commented

    funny, in the only soap operas where the church helps the mc, the church doesn't have any power, that doesn't make the slightest sense, it was said that the church changes royal families every 8 generations, but for them to do that they have to have strength , or are you going to tell me that the royal families will give their power to another family just because someone asked? and from what i saw the church cannot attack anyone, so why do countries listen to it?

    Ch 9 The emergency meeting
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    The Ancients World
    Games · easyread
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