I like that Felicia is able to make it clear this is not her choice. Bravo!

The story is fast paced. With each new chapter, we get introduced to new characters. Looking forward to reading the next chapters. Good work. Keep it up.

Thank you for your review

Should the 'but' be there?

Many thanks for the advice. As a newbie, your comments are a great help. I will explore more writing styles. Cheers!

Should be 'office' worker instead of 'officer'

It's exhilarating for a first chapter. Good start. Can't wait to read Chapter 3 [img=recommend]

You might want to close this speech at [senior"] Zhang Xuan answered back.

Wow! Hot chapter! Love it!

I think 'maybe it was after her mother 'fell' sick' instead of 'felt'. I like how you explain the feelings that Iris is feeling. Makes it easy to connect with Iris

Typo on last line. 'And two weeks after' instead of 'twp'

I like that it starts with a flashback. Beautiful start to this story.

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Thank you for your review. :)

Oh dear me! I wanted to portray James as a harmless guy. Too much?

We each need to have someone there that loves us for us and not some pretend person we want the world to see. I wanted to show James as that person for Moira. He hurts for her when she stumbles and falls. But he loves her enough to allow her to fall, be with her through her pain and motivate her to be the best person she can be. You know, that kind of unselfish love

Thank you. Do read on and share with me your thoughts