Ver intriguing storyline and storytelling.... It's quite a good and lovely story . It makes me feel to continue and read on ... and on...

It's really hard and difficult for people with greed and jealousy to comprehend the sincere efforts of others to achieve. These jealous kind of people think that they are the only ones capable that they fail to recognise achievers and often underestimate others by looks. Truly great ideas of the author and writer... the presentation of the scenery is brilliantly manifested.... KUDOS TO THE AUTHOR..... PLEASE BRING OUT MORE NICE SCENES LIKE THIS....

HAHAHAHA, it's a very interesting chapter of conflict to begin a storyline. ... Truly wonderful and nice.... Allows readers to grip for more readings...WOW WHAT WORK OF INTEREST.

Indeed very good and excellently written statement of a storyline.... I as the reader is induced to read on and continue reading to the end. . VERY IMPORTANTLY INTERESTING...

Interesting...why Is these????

WOW. .. Interesting and intriguing first chapter.... it allows the readers to thinking and predicting what will happen next... It enhances onse imagination through through various possible situations... allowing one to keep on reading... SO READ ON ...

highly interesting and hard to be put down reading material..