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I read the first few chapters and I can't continue reading it because the writer can't decide if kurama is a girl or a boy with her in one chapter and him in another I just can't continue reading it
Dud l love your story keep it up man
it feels like I am reading a script for actors for there lines in a movie not a story
I like it but it doesn't feel like I am reading a story more like a script "power ":soen instead of "power " said soen so on and ext
ooo thanks Jbsus