don't worry he wouldn't :p might be a bit spoiler but he will treat her better

I need to check your broken dantian, time to do a prostate exam.

let me give you one with a space then.player.additem f 99999, that one is for adding gold in Skyrim. greedisgood 99999 is for warcraft gold. there is waaayyy more cheatcodes with spaces so maybe you haven't been around as long as you think. those two are just the common ones.

it should be "greedisgood 99999" maybe it would have worked 😂

I really love author's humor 😂 it's so stupid but is so accurate.

plot twist, carl is orpel 😂

After reading the prologue I already knew that this is going to be a really fun read. After reading this chapter I'm so glad that there's like 2k chapters. And I can't wait to go through them all. big kudos for the author for great story telling. It doesn't feel rushed with just the right amount of detail not to be boring. Not to mention the fact that the sick and twisted revenge stories gives so much satisfaction.

I won't comment wether pacer is a professional or not. too many people is already arguing about it. What many people missed or just didn't pay attention to is the subtle hinting and a greatly played out twist. He killed Xavier but he is alive. That was already established since the start, and that inconsistency was once again played out in this prologue. I think it's great, would even pass as a one chapter horror story. Reminded me of a 2 sentence horror story from a forum. The said forum is hosting a writing competition for a ridiculously short horror story. It goes like this"The last person on earth is sitting on his room. There was a knock on the door." see it didn't have to make sense, It didn't have to be perfect. The inconsistency and the twist is enough for me to remember this short prologue for a really long time.

yep, this is world of warcraft sheit right here

hope to see you actually achieve that. and you are right, tv shows and films often just depicts stories that scratches the surface of what reality entails. First realized I like these dark genre when I watched berserk and a couple other things. Seeing a novel show the psychological trauma and turmoil is a nice breather for me. Add to it the fact that you aren't simply making up conjectures on what they might be feeling and instead basing it on actual human behaviour theories gives it more depth. Overall really satisfied with what I've read so far. people do come here for stories though so yeah, good luck finding that sweet spot between a well thought off plot and human depravity.

thanks for this, I am extremely interested in psychology stuff and I have found a lot of reference in your work. Looking forward for more of these incorporation in the future chapters. And they said you never learn anything from novels lol.

The author seem to have a weird writing style where some words are repeated. "we have, actually" is one example. At first I thought this is a typo but the more I see the trend the more i realize that it is intended. Such a peculiar writting style that I have only ever seen once in a different novel in wattpad called "the bet". Although the writter of said novel utilizes it very differently, often to switch perspectives between the male and female protagonist. Not complaining though, just sharing my observations. Besides, I like peculiar stuff.

It bothers me at how well written this is lol. you usually don't find materials that exerts effort into describing their perverted desire lol.

i really have no idea how some people think so little of the mc so far. each of us can excell and be bad at something. Having virtually ZERO social skills and experience you cant really blame him for being blinded by his emotions. If these people calling him simp have really good social and analytic skills to not fall for for the same thing the mc did well good for you folks, let's see you be an accountant then. Im a firm believer that people who get off berating someone, find faults from another have an inferior complex, they only feel superior when they drag someone to the mud.

I must say, on the earlier chapters when author said there will be a multiverse crossover to his other novels I was skeptical. It seemed like a poor excuse of an advertisement. Now that I am reading it though I am astonished at how the author came up with it. Well executed and just enough to make you wanna visit the other novels. Had to say though with all these "queen" business happening right now, noah and skyhall seem way too insignificant. not sure how i feel about that

cant help but notice that the author took inspiration to hogwarts. 4 long tables for each houses. The ceiling being a starry nigh sky with floating candles were dead give away. not sure how i feel about this arc though since almost all the isekai novel ends up being in an academy. Still, seeing how this novel presented itself so far.. might as well give it a try

eyyy this might be the best paragraph I've seen in this app ever. I absolutely love it. Finally an author that shares my kinks.

Author said it but I have the same mind. There's a reason not all water bender can manage to be blood benders. just like controlling earth and metal can be different, it should take a whole other level to control blood too.

this might be the most satisfying chapter on this novel so far. love the cold personality of the mc, coupled with the indifferent reaction of aaisha while pampering him. Hope this continues and I will support this novel as long as it does.

so orland was able to bruise sato who single handedly defeated a pheonix. He is even out of breath? I think im dropping the story now. it stated quite strong. good story telling and nice grammar with minimal typo. But why is the MC so dumb and pathetic. this chapter is the last straw. hope this comment prove helpful for author's future endeavors.