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The ratings are scam. Okay so I have read 10 chapters only and yet Mc can solo an entire fire kingdoms base in a village. At level 10 he is a metal bending master and in 3 week he taught his whole village i.e. 'those who can learn' Metal bending and built a damned wall of metal. With 16 stat in his phisical stat he could life 500kg which mind you is the maximum weight captain America can lift.There are too many inconsistencies to even count, at this point i can say that it's not even wish fulfillment anymore maybe it could get better but I can't bear it any longer.
Hello author it is very fun read. Now about the idea I say you bring a character with system in the novel and he fights against tony. In almost all the fanfiction with system the guy becomes arrogant and trashes everyone around.in this 8 year of time skip you can give him enough cheats to content with this super tony. Someone teaching manners to the system owner is long due
It's all good and fine but don't make Peter stronger than strange. Because you know strange is destined to become the strongest sorcerer supreme before and after. It doesn't make sense if Peter could become better than him just with a genius brain .
The story is really great. no useless characters popping out here and there and the cultivation aspect is really good.
Thanks for the previous reply author I have a little request can you please make danerys more prideful ( as her pride is her charm) something like she never asks mc for skills and help whatever mc gives her she'll use only that to gain strength And don't let mc talk to her more often ( once a month maybe) otherwise he will solve all her problems which left no room for character development
Author please can you please not give mc such op skills with such miniscule amount of B.E. And what's with this insane skill weather control and with what like 100 essence Common the story doesn't even need this skill this senseless addition only ruins the otherwise good story