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lsdgh3454mthCommentedCh 12 Chapter 12- lsdgh3455mthCommentedCh 178 CH_6.7 (178)
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- lsdgh3457mthCommentedCh 11 Timeskip and, Quidditch or Stealing and Brewing
- lsdgh3457mthPosted
Since I saw a lot of negative reviews that I think this story doesn’t deserve Imma leave a positive one.The MC feels like a real person, it has good character development and is written well. Maybe write some new abilities or skills that are unique to the MC and not just from one piece, though that’s just my suggestion.
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- lsdgh3458mthReplied to A_Beautiful_Hart
It means total party kill
As Milo searched for the broomstick, he let his mind wander again. The last thing he'd done before slamming into that table in the manor house was confront the Supremely Evil Fell Lord Thamior the Thaumaturge (try putting that on a business card) with his companions. Everything was going according to plan, then suddenly... table. Milo was sure Thamior hadn't had a chance to get a spell off, especially not one of this magnitude. Maybe something over here pulled him across? Why in the Prime Material would anyone want to summon Milo, of all things? Milo shuddered to think of what Thamior was doing to his party without his arcane support. It was probably going to be his job upon returning to raise funds for three Raise Deads, because a thief, a meatshield, and a glorified box of band-aids against Thamior's power spelled T-P-K. - lsdgh3458mthCommentedCh 7 Chapter 4: Let's Do It
- lsdgh3459mthCommentedCh 63 Phone Call
- lsdgh34510mthCommented
I bet Danzo doesnt like that Naruto is getting along and training with the Hyuga
Naruto's wide and infectious smile seemed like a beacon in the still-misty morning. "Thank you, Kiyoshi," he expressed his gratitude, his voice filled with relief as he joined Kiyoshi's side. The gratitude in his blue eyes was evident, shining brighter than the dawn's light. - lsdgh34510mthReplied to Devilkin
Eternal not immortal
I knew that if I wasn't born with the talent. It must have been a result of my reincarnation. I'd already been fully aware while in the womb of my mother, hardly something a fetus brain was capable of facilitating. No, my thought processes and memories weren't stored in the brain, they were stored in my soul. A brain would decay after death after all, taking all its knowledge with it. A soul however, was eternal. - lsdgh34510mthCommentedCh 112 CH_4.12 (112)
- lsdgh34510mthCommented
Wouldnt the hyuga eyes notice the sharigan
This paragraph has been deleted. - lsdgh34511mthCommentedCh 107 Ch. 100 - Reveal