Also seems to require double the amount of coins needed for other books

Not true; I have even bought privilege chapters and read upto chapter 388. NOTHING is better. Zero progress made. The author is just repeating the story to make it long. Do better. People shouldn’t pay to see that every chapter has only 1 new paragraph and several repeations of the story.

Very repeatitive. The content is repeated over and over and over again while you keep paying. I have read 388 cha pters and there is zero content development. FL is still weak and helpless. Mackie is 7 years old but speaks like a 4 yr old. Venon is still plotting. The author needs to tell the story instead of dragging it out. Definitely not paying any more for this.

It’s very interesting but also quite repetitive. What Vernon saw as a child, how Chloe took care of him, her need to protect Vernon from his brother and what Vernon heard Chloe say about him to their father…these have been repeated in the book so many times.. it’s a DNF for me.

This is quite repetitive. I have read comments about Venon watching his father with other women too many times in this book. so many of Venon and Chloe’s thoughts have also been repeated so many times. Definitely not spending my money reading this. Do better