Since this will be my first published fantasy novel, I'm dedicated to this and I hope that the readers will come to like my story.

the concept is good, it's interesting since all of them have the ability to acquire a "system". And the "system" in the author's world is like a ring finger of everyone. This just means that everyone has their fate and role once they're bound in the system, no bad.

the reason why the author focused on Raymond's POV was to describe the personality or how the people in that Magic Era behave, like they would only respect and fear you if you're far stronger than them. Now I'm hooked up with this chapter, I'll continue reading this

And by the way, I wish the author would include my name in the story though hehe even if my name would be just a mere side character I would be more grateful that I would die tomorrow

I will personally give these 5/5 why? It's just really wholesome! I love it, the characters, the plot, the resources, the names... everything! I love how the story develops itself and someone can just tell from afar that the author has paid much effort into this novel. Even as a writer I was amazed by the bones. I'm currently done with Volume 4 and I was expecting that there would be more interesting than will be bound to happen! Nevertheless, I have never paid attention to myself in reading this kind of novel since this type of genre was not my cup of tea but then this is exceptional... Unique I say. Anyways, author if you're reading this I'm thankful for you being born and have created this wonderful piece, this has become a part of my life now!