The feeling

First person's POV is always a breath of fresh air and great when it involves death, horror and cough lots more... The title and synopsis did a good number to make me want to give it a try and the first chapter... Oh wow... eeeiiiisshhhh I'm eager for what's to come... The usage of words, the narration it self, the pace at which the scenes flows... The author did great with the writing. And every chapter is a page turner. This is good. I look forward to more... hehhe can we add torture later? lol. hehhe. Goodluck!

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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Hmm Zephyr is something else.