very good work, the best I have come across so far

major red curtain this one is

YES!!!!!big yes

my own question is 'where in the world is Graham right now, there only Louise and graham left,I'm hoping no one else will die

you have a very wild mind 😂😂

I'm not that makes sense because abi's father according to the story says he is a simple man while simple on the other hand doesn't define zaki

its just the beginning of his suffering😜😜😜😜😜😜

a really amazing first chapter