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That was a waste of a chapter.
See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
The plot is interesting, but I can't get into it with all of the errors. I don't know if this has been translated from another language but I just can't enjoy it when I constantly have to try to figure out what's going on.
The beginning is very jumbled, and doesn't explain much but it got better.