RKPhoenix
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Hello, I was reading your other novel and I love it! (Rise of the Pervert Primordial). I don't mean to be rude and ultimately it is your novel, but is there any yuri in this novel? I really don't like it and its a deal breaker for me. This is just me being picky, you still make great stories!
Just with less tails
Would this one be good for Erin?
200 is max intimacy. Starting from 100 is a familial or romantic intimacy.
Yep, I should have put it more clearly. Thank you for pointing that out to me!
Yeah, I like the conquers path but I have no idea where that harem is headed. 😅 I hope I don't disappoint when it comes to the harem, and while he will have to act a little it wont be to trick the heroines' hearts. If you have any more feedback I would love to hear it!
Yeah, you're right, it does sound a little confusing doesn't it. But yes he has played the game. Thank you for your comment!