MonstruoDormido
Has the potential to edit your RAW translations to perfection
of reading
256
Read books
1,2 & 3
would be good if he somehow gets a reward that'll allow tigress to take on a more human form like less hairy... ahem maybe a human looking being with beast traces like her tigress eyes and yeah you get it. and maybe introduce a new system function where he will acquire a companion slot that'll help him bring the women to other world... coz honestly having to freeze a world and leave only to come back again doesn't make it original. In addition to that, the women have to meet one way or another otherwise it won't be a harem and might be just a guy cheating with other women. A harem is formed with the agreement of all involved parties. no lady would want her man to associate with women she is unaware of... knowing each other makes it more interesting and original... if maybe you can make an 'ascension' where a being can ascend after reaching a certain level of strength... that way the mc will be sure to make the women powerful so they ascend together... just a thought on this one.
That... kinda explains so much 😂😂
Follow everywhere I go Top of all the mountains or valley low Give you everything you've been dreaming of Just let me in, ooh Everything you want in gold I'll be the magic story you've been told And you'll be safe under my control Just let me in, ooh (that's kinda fitting ya know?)
😂😂😂 You're a funny man...
so yeah formally I have to say the story is good... for the majority maybe? I don't know, you just see for yourself men... this may be a spoiler to some but I didn't put the spoiler tag on purpose to let you know the things above. If you want to read yourself and see what I've seen in the book then don't read beyond this POINT. But if you are keen on knowing how I feel about it then— read the paragraphs below... How frustrating. so its basically one of those tales where the mc and the other character sits around a born fire and have a conversation: "Hey remember that time I helped people who tortured you for months because of my selfish reason, and you forgave me in one day because of a stupid reason?". The other replies, "yeah I remember, even my father saved your daughter as if he's repaying you for saving me— when you were saving me to repay for my miserly. Come to think of it, who was repaying who?" The other replies again, "I'm not sure, but I'm glad you forgave like a moron." thats how the story is... The mc gets tortured because of some guy helping his daughter. Then the mc just gets a little sad or angry and forgives them... as far as I could read which was stupid and frustrating considering that no one who is reasonable can do so... which bring us to character development needing reasonable improvement. at leas it must make sense like how a living being would act.
A very good novel with good plot and good character development. just wanna ask who the heck is the main character? is it this Yumo? if so you could've at least added a genderbender tag not to confuse us. Still that'd be a turn of since its not what I was expecting... I need your confirmation author, whether to continue or not. don't wanna end up disappointed by the turn of events.