sometimes authors write it so bad or repeat it so much that it becomes impossible to ignore.

these are the things that make us hate Chinese people. inserting their nationalism everywhere without any fkin' apparent reason.

I don't understand the people saying that this crap is good. well it doesn't make any fkin' sense to me. I just can't read it. it's not for the critiques. if you wanna kill your brains cells than be my guest and read it till it hits completion otherwise stay the fkin' several km away from it.

no explanation ........ at least say something like, " one evening when mc was enjoying a leisure walk on the edges of riverbank while lost in thoughts of his life's direction, he fell into the river as a result of his foot slipping and lost consciousness when he came to, he saw a holographic blue green red etcetera etcetera screen floating in front oh his eyes which called itself a system and treasure collecting system at that". or something like that.

bro your synopsis tells me that I shouldn't hope for good English quality

I'm only seeing "failed to load image".

lol, if you gonna use bots at least use one with eyes.

I pity you if you think it's well written

Is syntax quality gonna be as bad as it is in this paragraph, further below?

After reading your review, I think I'll like stories of your recommendation. So can you plz recommend me some? Thanks.

I don't know why but lately all of the stories are following same trend, good quality at the start after two or three hundred chapters, huge like a fking mount Everest huge dip in quality(of story, imagination, world building, character development and translation to boot) and quantity. Maybe it's the team behind webnovel itself who is fking up.

you should be on drugs because you won't be able to face harsh cruel realities of life mate.

Mr. Author you should just start drugs if that's your definition of cruel, selfish MC. you should then read reverend insanity , and one on less spectrum but still better than your crap whose name I don't remember but in that story MC reincarnates with ai chip in his brain.

fkin author mc didn't had a bad life, he was just a pussy. If that your definition of hellish life then oh boy you haven't seen the world you mama's boy. Everything you described(lol did you even describe anything?) is a normal routine of every human. It just shows how shallow your fkin' brain is.

WTF, Either webnovel is becoming a whorehouse for bots where they fuck and give birth to new bots like they are on drugs similar to viruses, who in turn fuck with authors to give birth to autho'bots. Or the asian people are all retarded shits. GTFOH.

edit 1: Crappy stories are all Either one dimensional or all over the place and this one tops in both. Author/translator either lacks proper guidance or is just messed up in his head due to his pervert nature. The topic is gender neutral atm but no Mr.Author/translator here is gonna slap a fkin' gender in it depending on who asked a question. I mean(around chapter 60/70) girl asks professor as to who's the leader so it becomes crystal clear that leader isn't decided yet but instead of keeping the answer gender neutral, author/translator here stuffs the gender saying she has lots of responsibilities and etcetera etcetera. Lots of paragraphs don't even fkin' make sense unless you are reading this book under microscope. You mofo you have pretty bland story here which bores me to death, which is why I can't keep up with you switching faces like a monkey's ass.

Story's premise is good but the translation and syntax is as bad as Author/translator's desire to get fucked from sideways. You biatch come to papa, I'll satisfy your desire and itch to get fucked sideways, I'll fuck you sideways but not just sideways, I'll fucking fuck you and your whole family from every direction possible then Imma start whoring them you fkin' cunt of a author/translator. When you come to me, and after getting fucked from every hole of your body, you'll never ever utter a fkin' peep of fucking you sideways, you'll just wanna get files or not at all. While your hunger of getting fucked gets satiated, it'll also help improve your Crappy translation, you fkin' tranny abomination. If you don't see any improvement I Guarantee you that someone from your family will certainly improve. [img=fp][img=update][img=recommend][img=proud] p.s: If you are truly your father's son then I dare you to delete this review (which is not a review per se).

hey author I read this story around the chapter where multiple characters are fkin' linked to MC's mind(his pet, locket, and the one girl who's keeping her eyes on him to keep him in line for her master's freedom). It became a cluster fuck of sorts. And that was the tipping point for me to drop it. Are those shits still linked to him or not, if yes then I'm not gonna read. and plz don't make mc fuck his slime or whatever pet(which he got from jungle at the start of story). And tell me your story doesn't have any romcom shit in it, that's a negative point for almost all the good stories. No love, no feelings just fkin' fuck. that's what I want.

this was nice setup, not like others where they survive and fall in love like a fkin retard.

pretty long, so much word count without solid and beautiful syntax.